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We Were All Told  (Rondelet)

We Were All Told (Rondelet)

A Poem by Kim S.
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Rondelet

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We were all told 
that life would only get better 
We were all told 
to peel back all of the mold 
to read all our old love letters
all of our thoughts are go getters
We were all told

© 2024 Kim S.


Author's Note

Kim S.
Rondelet form - This is a tricky form. This is the set up. I think I accomplished it, I followed the directions.
It has to have the same words in line 1,3,7
It has to rhyme in lines 1&3 and then again in lines 2,5,6

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SO very creative, really enjoyed this style of write.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


"to read all our old love letters
all of our thoughts are go getters
We were all told"

These lines here just stand out for some reason, I enjoyed this form.
Very nicely written.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

2 Weeks Ago

thank you so much

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Kim S.
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Been married for 15 years this year. I am still as happy as the day we met. I love my husband so much. I've been around the cafe here for about 13 years. I had an account once but closed it years ago... more..

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