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Stop pretending.

You say you love me,

And then you disappear.

I wish you would stop it all.

Stop the lies.

Stop the fake tears.

I understand it all, a little too well.

I know that you love me,

And you know that I love you too.

Loved you.

You’ve pushed me too much, though.

I’m over it now.

I can’t take it anymore.

Stop begging.

I won’t give in.

I don’t deserve you,

I know that much.

But I won’t keep putting myself down anymore.

You should just move on.

I know I’m a s**t,

I’ve been told that before,

So trust me, I know all too well.

You’d be better off without me,

So please.

Just move on before it hurts us both more.

Author's Note

Please review. I wrote this really quickly, while crying my eyes out. Yes, this is true.
So, please leave any advice/critisism/etc. I know it's not perfect, but I want some feedback. Thanks for reading :/

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I THOUGHT IT WAS WELL WRITTEN! EVEN THOUGH YOU WROTE IT QUICKLY YOU DID AN OUTSTANDING JOB!

[Michael X]

some poems really pull the readers heartstrings ad this possesses such
quality as to lead the heart down a path of heartache and sorrow,
brilliant job, your emotions are so real and raw and powerful without
being overstating and the form really emphasizes the reflective
quality that allows the reader to ponder such, the agonizing defeat
of letting someone get the best of us, your talent is flowing of the page
here, beautifully done and powerful.

[Ian Faraway]

I liked it, but the situation was unclear because it ended differently than the beginning suggested.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I feel this way often. Im sorry you are going through this.. Ir eall like this though. very good.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

ohh, I hope things get better, good poem

[Short.Nerd]

Great Job! i can feel the emotion in this poem.

[Caitlynxoxo]

oh man this really hits hard :( You need to have more confidence in yourself because you are a great person and a great writer; whoever this person is, saying all this junk, needs to open their eyes. Never call yourself a s**t, because you are just opening yourself for a world of hurt, trust me. Anyway, on to the poem itself; beautifully written, as per usual, and as well, i found that this one had a rythmic flow, thanks to the strong words :) THANKS FOR SHARING!!
xoxoCaitlynxoxo

[r]

:( I love this poem, it's SO sad and the emotions are strong. forget whoever this is and all they've done. it's not right, if they've hurt you. You're NOT a s**t and you're an amazing person. Never forget how amazing you are.