Richard the Fearless

Richard the Fearless

A Poem by Scott Free
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An epic style poem--old style of writing. Sorry about the weirdish spacing, I pasted this off Word. Don't like the text editor.

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Richard the Fearless
 
                First Fit
 
It has been full fifty years            
Since Rollo took the main;                           
And ever since his descendants,
                Have ruled without abstain.
                Rollo’s child William,
And his son Richard,
                Have all been loyal vassals
                Of the king of hoist petard.
                Louis IV of Paris,
The dastard of the land,
                Who receives more than he bargains for
                And withdraws his reaching hand.
 
                For his father Charles the Simple,
                Was threatened by Vikings strong.         
                Rollo the Dane attacked Paris,
                With a hardy Norseman throng.
                Charles did not pay tribute,
                In gold or silver bright,
                But the hardy shores near Brittany,
                That beauteous Rouen Bight.
                So Rollo took up the duchy,
                And called it Normandy,
                And colonized it with Danes,
                And loved its beaches sandy.
 
                And always independent ,
                Has been the Norman race,
                Though they be France’s vassals,
                They will never be part of that place.
                William, Rollo’s eldest son,
                Gained for himself the hate,
                Of every man in Frankish land,
                And the king of that pow’rful state.
So the assassination call,
Was given by the Duke of Flanders.
                William now in his grave does lie,
                Sleeping with the salamanders.
 
Now Hugh the Duke of Burgundy,
                And Louis King of France,
                Conspire to take this land of ours,
                In a fighting stance.
                ‘I shall have this land my father gave,
                To those ungrateful Danes,
                I’ll spew the spawn of Rollo’s blood,
                Upon the Norman lanes!’
                Louis vies that he will try,
                To detain William’s heir,
                Young Richard, who is ten years of age,
                Will be taken out of there.
               
                Louis marches to Rouen,
                To take proud Normandy,
                Whilst to Bayeux now travels Hugh,
                The Duke of Burgundy.
                When the French into Rouen’s hall,
                Come marching in mail attire,
                Young Richard’s face is red and hot,
                This attack has aroused his ire.
                Says Richard; “You may take me now,
                And bind me with chains of steel,
                And lock me up in some musty tower,
                But I will ne’er yield.
                Know Louis, that the day shall come,
                When riding I will be,
Leader of Normans eighteen thousand,
                A veritable army.
               
                ‘And run from my sword shall you and Hugh,
                As we ride to take Normandy back,
                With eighteen thousand Norman men,
                To chase you and your pack.’
                Louis stood straight in the saddle,
                As if struck by a slap in the rear,
                Was overcome with awe and wonder,
                At this boy who spoke without fear.
                But regaining his composure,
                He shouted to his guards,
                ‘Take this boy to Lâon tower,
                And we break Normandy into shards.’
                He wheeled his horse and looked upon,
                Young Richard of Normandy,
                Who felt no fear as he was led away,
                To Lâon in Picardie.
               
                To Lâon in Picardie duchy,
                Went the young duke and his guards.
                The perilous journey of this youth,
Is sung of by no minstrels or bards.
                And through the rain and snow of France,
                Richard kept himself warm,
                With the smoldering vengeance in his heart,
                That was like a concealed storm.
                To Lâon he was taken,
                And locked up in the tower,
                And five guards stood right at the door,
                For every waking hour.
 
                For three years the young boy waited,
                And bided all his time,
                And looked out on the countryside,
                As bright and green as lime.
                Meanwhile Louis battled
                With the Norsemen of the land,
                Trying to break down their morale,
                And crush them with his hand.
                For three long years he battled,
                Hugh the Black at his side,
                And three years they ravaged the land,
                And burned it far and wide.
               
                The duchy fought strong and hardily,
                To shake off the enemy,
                But the French numbers soon overcame,
                The brave Norsemen army.
                And now a council is convened,
                To see what we should do,
                To fight off the Franks and thin their ranks,
                Ere we find ourselves in a stew.
                At the head of yon council,
Is Bernard, Denmark’s son,
                To his right is Anslech de Bricquebec,
                At his left, Raoul Taisson.
               
                These gallant three are what we
                Call the ‘Guardians of Normandy’,
                Their forces are what saved us,
                From the scourge of Louis.
                Bernard addresses the barons,
                His beard is carrot red,
                His clothes are of rough reindeer skin,
                As is the cap upon his head.
                ‘My friends and fellow Normans,
                Who fought under Rollo,
                And did his son, the Longsword,
                Most loyally follow,
               
What, in this dark hour,
                Shall we do to save Rouen?
                And send Louis on his way,
                As quickly as we can?
                For this war is a weary one,
                For I, and many of you.
                I ask for anyone who knows,
                What can we, should we, do?’
Then stood a young Norman warrior,
                Young Taisson, also a Raoul,
                Who was loved by all the subjects,
                That his father over did rule.
               
‘I would kill a thousand giants,
                Slay a hundred venomous snakes,
                Do anything for this young duke of ours,
                Who now, in Picardie, waits.
                I will travel, now, to save him,
                If ye will but give me leave,
                For if he is not brought back to us,
                We will all have cause to grieve.’
Bernard the Dane was quite amazed,
                At this youth’s audacity,
                He said; ‘I’ll give you leave, my son,
                But what of your father, will he?’
               
Raoul Taisson was not a man,
                To bandy terminology.
                He remained in his chair, but looked on his son,
                With pride and no apology.
                His head it slowly nodded,
                His silver mane it waved,
                And so forth went young Raoul,
                The youth who was so brave.
                With only fifty followers,
                He rode from Normandy,
                Out across the Seine he went,
                And on to Picardie.
               
Second Fit
 
When they reached the peaceful
Little city of Lâon,
                They camped in the forest
And no longer would go on.
                Morale was low for they did not know,
                Whence they would rescue their lord.
                For it was clear they had no men,
                To take the town by sword.
                For ten days the Normans waited,
                And spirits faltered low,
                Until on the tenth Raoul stood up,
                Said; ‘Verily, I know!’
               
‘This night I shall take with me,
                Rope and hook to climb the wall,
                And whilst I climb it, you men will fight,
                The enemy, the Gaul.’
                And they gave a cheer for all to hear,
                For they now had a plan.
                And rested up their horses,
                To aid them when they ran.
Night fell and all the Normans,
                Met at the forest bound’ries.
                With their Norman spears in hand,
                Made at the Norman foundries.
                
And then they gave a cry—‘Huzzah!
                Let’s clove them to the teeth!
                And send those brutes where they belong,
                To Hades, far beneath.’
                To see the soldiers faces
As the Danes rushed at the wall!
For every Frank’s eyes opened wide,
Up went an alarming call.
The Frankish garrison came out,
To engage the boist’rous foe,
Whilst Raoul made way up the tower,
Little did they know.
 
The droning sound of steel on steel
Echoed through the night.
And every Frank found on that eve,
How a Norman axe could bite.
The two opposing sides attack,
Splinter, crash, crack and bash,
The arrow cuts into the bone;
The broadsword and the shield clash.
Young Richard, he was sleeping,
When the sounds of battle came,
And he rose when upon his ears
Fell the sound of his name.
 
‘Who is there?’ he asked without fear,
‘Answer right this moment!’
The answer came quiet in the night,
‘Milord, do not the guards foment!’
‘Raoul Taisson?’ ‘It’s I’
‘You come to set me free?’
‘I would never desert you, my young lord.
Now quickly, come to me.’
Up from the cot he rose,
And strode right to the casement,
Gladly met he and friend Raoul,
Who’s father had been his replacement.
 
But the guarding Frank had heard the clank,
When hook caught on the stone,
And sidled by Richard’s chamber,
When he began to stir and moan.
He listened to the words being spoke,
‘Tween servant and young lord,
And came he into the chamber,
Brandishing his sword.
‘Stop, ye Norman varlets! Stop, ye sons of Thor!
Stop right now, or by my trow,
Alive ye’ll be no more!’
Raoul turned upon the Gaul,
And he unsheathed his sword.
‘Run, my good young master,
Run, my gracious lord!’
 
Richard stopped a moment,
And looked back at his friend,
But to the window his feet went;
Raoul to spell the Frenchmen’s end.
The Frank looked upon his younger foe,
Who was not a day over eighteen,
He sneered and snickered, and he sayed;
‘I’ll split you from spout to spleen!’
Raoul was not frightened,
Nor did he show a mite of fear.
Quickly, he leapt forward,
And slashed at the Frenchman’s ear.
 
The sound of clashing in the night
Resounded from the tower,
As Richard hied him down the wall
For nearly half an hour.
Many times he slipped and thought
That he would lose his hold.
But clutch on to the rope he would
And go on, ever bold.
                Raoul in gaol-room fought the foe,
                Sent three to Death’s dark door.
                However, the fourth came with a spear,
                And struck him to the floor.
               
And there he lay; all spilling blood,
                Across the stony ground,
                At last he uttered; ‘God protect!
                Young Richard, safe and sound.’
Finally reaching soft earth,
                Richard laid his foot right down,
                Then running, fast as he could go,
                To the skirts of Lâon town.
                The Normans saw that brave young lad,
                Running forward with hastening feet,
                They gave up a cheer that was wondrous to hear,
                And their young lord they did greet.
               
Third Fit
 
Away from Lâon town they rode,
                And back to Normandy,
                They went to meet Louis of France,
                And Hugh of Burgundy.
                To raise the siege of Rouen they went,
                (The town had been taken back,
                By the fighting Normans unwav’ring,
                To save it from the sack.)
                The battle was hard and bloody,
                As battles always are,
                The Norman morale was lowering,
                And help was very far.
 
                Richard rallied all his soldiery,
                In a field, many miles from Rouen,
                And Viking and Dane came to aid,
                The cause of their Norman friends.
                All the numbers have been counted,
                The Norse cover the field,
                And every man can lift a spear,
                And all men have a shield.
                But Richard frowned and stared at the ground,
                Their number was not enough, quite;
                For he had promised that he would attack
                With eighteen thousand in final fight.
               
                And there is only fifteen thousand,
                With which to fight Louis.
                And send him from the land of Rollo,
                The beauteous Normandy.
                ‘But look, my lord!’ cries someone,
                ‘There rides Bernard the Dane!
                And with him nigh three hundred men,
                With which to aid your train.’
                And this young boy looked up with joy,
                To see his liegeman coming,
                With a good three hundred Normans,
                To finish up the summing.
               
                And Bernard bowed low before Richard,
                And wept great tears of joy,
                For though he was old, it made his heart bold,
                To see his duke’s young boy.
                The old Raoul was with him,
                He scanned the ranks for his child,
                But seeing not the young Raoul,
                He lowered his head, ever mild.
                ‘Your son gave up his life for me,’
                Said Richard, the Young,
                ‘And a greater gift he could not give,
                His tale will be rightly sung.’
 
                ‘Now let us not forget him,
                As we fight in this hour.
                To save all in our Normandy,
                Raoul is in Valhalla.’
                And Richard now raised up his blade
                And looked upon the host,
                And saw that it was wonderful,
                A great army, of which to boast.
                They marched off, singing songs of yore,
                And of old Denmark’s gods,
                They marched through field and forest,
                They marched ‘cross Normandy’s sods.
               
                Louis at Rouen he fought
And his men took the walls,
                And now many a Frank is slain,
                Now many a Norman falls.
                And Louis smiles craftily,
                Seeing the ladders swarming with French,
                Though his nostrils are filled with
                The deathly, deadly stench.
                And he is about to say ‘Ha ha!’
                ‘We have won, by God’s grace!’
                But then, on a sound, he turns around,
                And fear fills his face.
 
                For there is standing at the top of yon hill,
                The vengeful son of the Longsword,
                And behind his back is an army;
                They have already crossed the ford.
                ‘Full eighteen thousand have I brought,
                Son of Charles the Simple,
                Now prepare to meet Norse reckoning!’
                Louis almost burst at the temples.
                With a shout Richard gives the call
                To attack, and drive them away,
                And the Norse on their horses thunder down,
                Like the angels on Judgment Day.
 
                And every Frenchman feels the chill,
                Of defeat rush through his blood.
                The wounded are thrown down onto the ground,
                And wallow in the mud.
                Richard heads straight for Louis,
                And the two begin to fight,
                Richard’s blood is red, and hotter,
                Than a wildfire in the night.
                He strikes and slashes at Louis the king,
                Sends him reeling off his steed.
                And then right off his mount he climbs,
                To fight, and prove his meed.
               
                Richard, with great strokes of pride,
                Knocks Louis’ sword from his hand,
                And Louis scurries back, before he is killed,
                By this young firebrand.
                But Richard does not rush forward,
                To remove Louis’ head.
                He puts his sword back in its sheath;
                ‘I’ll let you leave, undead.
                But know this, Louis, King of France,
                E’er again you enter my demesne,
                I will not hesitate to cut off your head,
                And end your greedy reign.’
 
                And Louis now is beaten;
                His soldiers march off in defeat,
                And Louis the overreaching cur,
                Is staring at his horse’s feet.
                For not only is he humbled by,
                This young duke’s lack of fear,
                But by this act of mercy,
                That saved King Louis’ rear.
                And now he swears he shall never again,
                Bother with the Norman men,
                But hopes that he may raise his son,
                To attack Normandy again.
 
                And Richard was hailed in Rouen,
                As saver of Normandy,
                (Bernard had defeated that scoundrel,
                Hugh of Burgundy)
                And now to this day the brave men say,
                How this young boy of power,
                Did come to succor Normandy,
                In its most perilous hour.
                And they cast a bronze statue of him,
                That stands now in Falaise,
                One of the Six Dukes of Normandy,
                For testament, if I lie.
               
                And God truly had his hand,
                In this whole affair,
                For Richard all Normandy baptized,
                And he went to Paradise fair.
                And his son was Richard the Second,
                And his, Richard the Third,
                His son was Robert, and his William,
                Called the Conqueror (of him you’ve heard).
Till Richard died, he reigned in justice,
                He ruled bravely and well,
                And they call him ‘Richard, the Fearless’,
                Because of the tale I tell.

© 2008 Scott Free


Author's Note

Scott Free
This was inspired by the Romantic-era works of Alfred, Lord Tennyson, Macaulay, and others. It is in the 'epic' style. The style is never used nowadays as far as I know, and it's really old fashioned. You know. But I guess I'm just old fashioned myself.
The story, I must tell you, is somewhat embellished (especially the rescuing part and all) and wouldn't be completely condoned by any History Majors. But I assure you that Richard's age and how he defeated Louis are definite historical happenings.



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I loved this! I do believe that this is the longest poem I have ever read. By the way. My family is from England and William the Conqueror is listed in our family tree.

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Rather lengthy, but very interesting. It's been a while since I've read an epic-style poem, it's true that no one seems to write in this style anymore. You did a very good job, this has a classic feel to it. I love how you incorporated the history. Well done!

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Wow, this is really long! And, one which is based on history. You must have some background knowledge on the chosen subject. It seems like you're good at it. Keep it up!

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Wow this must have taken a long time to write dude! It is hilarious and great story. Your great at poetry, esspecially this long. Geez this would take me forever.

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I loved this! I do believe that this is the longest poem I have ever read. By the way. My family is from England and William the Conqueror is listed in our family tree.

Now, I thought I had one of the longest poem. The Curse of Mayweather House In Rhyme. Check it out.

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I can see the influence of Tennyson in this piece. So very well done, this epic is simply amazing. It took me some time to get through the read, but the history, the legend and the drama are so well conceived and presented that I will go back to read this again. What an amazing journey. ~Pamela

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Wow this must have been really hard and time consuming to do. It was very informative though. Great job.

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