A good piece about nature...
Hope those seven sisters keep on blooming.
Nature is so beautiful in all it's forms.
Nicely done. Great poem, enjoyed reading it.
Keep it up! Take good care Betty.
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16 Hours Ago
Thank you for a delayed yet lovely review!
Warmly, B
15 Hours Ago
I am so sorry for the delay...
You are most welcome.
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So wonderfully you explained the beauty of nature with example of sister's in an unique way. Yes each of them are different I your own surrealist way! Great one B ~
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
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Thank you my friend or an excellent review
Warmly, B.
1 Week Ago
Welcome friend :)
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This is a beautiful poem using sister as a way to talk about the season and how they hibernate, sprout grow then wither and again hibernate until the sun is warm and flourishing
The flower and the pumpkins are a great way to show the changing of the seasons as well as them huddling together to stay warm from the snow.
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
2 Weeks Ago
Thank you PB for a lovely review, and a thorough understanding of the poem….
Warmly, B
Ahh, I have heard of the six sisters myth, which goes along the lines that they were chased into the sky and became a constellation, which ties up into so many cities myths of being built on six hills, but seven sisters is a new one to me at least.
But nice to know that old Ma Naturehas some help in her latter years as keeping up with all the messes we make must have her near enough bald from tearing out her hair at our own selfishness.
I would not like to be the guy who causes the next oil spill with seven of them to contend with....and I can assure you, it will be a guy! 😃
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
2 Weeks Ago
One can see the Seven Sister mountains from a beautiful lake in Black Mountain NC…thank you Lorry .. read moreOne can see the Seven Sister mountains from a beautiful lake in Black Mountain NC…thank you Lorry for your excellent review!
Warmly,B
Betty, you have a unique way of making solidity gently inviting, of creating charm out of distant apparitions; - creating truth out of reality and welcoming it on behalf of dull eyes and minds.
Each of your stanzas is visual and more but there is something about..
'They giggle with each other
as spring beckons
with buds of wild flowers
coating their voluptuous figures
and green sprouts enveloping their bonnets'
We have similar but not the same here, the seven sisters cliffs in Sussex. They chalk their way along a distance that takes the breath away. Must research yours.. this One aims to learn something new every day, methinks have learned two!
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
2 Weeks Ago
Thanks a million EM….yes the Appalachian Mountains are the oldest in the world! We live among them.. read moreThanks a million EM….yes the Appalachian Mountains are the oldest in the world! We live among them…. And Seven Sisters is right near our house….. love your review!
Warmly, B💕
We have the three sisters in the blue mountains just three monoliths of rock and vegetation standing out, weathered by time. Somewhat immortal but time will catch up with them. Entertaining write Betty.
All nicely done
They must be quite impressive
here we have two "Lions" that overlook the lower mainland
I enjoy watching western movies just to see the remaining sandstone structures.
Is your lady planning to take a tour through the seven, possibly becoming "friendly" with a handsome tour guide..??
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Doubt it Davie….thanks for your lovely review….
Warmly
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So glad you liked it! Makes me smile! And thank you for your kind words, Much appreciated....
.. read moreSo glad you liked it! Makes me smile! And thank you for your kind words, Much appreciated....
Warmly, B
1 Month Ago
Welcome ;-] Love your words. sorry that I'm not always on here. Sometimes their ads really bother me.. read moreWelcome ;-] Love your words. sorry that I'm not always on here. Sometimes their ads really bother me ;-]
1 Month Ago
agreed! love yours too, the ads are disrupting!!!
I try to ignore them....B
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..