A Story by Beverly Jane

This is just a prologue i love writing them. Tell me what you think.



I felt th darkness of the pain surround me like a plague.  I felt like just my body was here and not my soul. They watched me their eyes torn between happiness but, sadness for me. He walked closer to me and wrapped his arms around me as I started to sob tears of pure agony. I heard another boom echoe behind us. Fear pierced its self into my now broken heart and my blood grew cold. My heart began to race and his arms tightened around me. "Shh," he said trying to comfort me. I enjoyed the moments I had in his arms for, death was coming for us. ~

© 2011 Beverly Jane

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Beverly Jane
It's just a prologue I haven't wrote any more for it.

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hey-... you didn't finish it off? :c awwwwwwwwwww still good though :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

hey! what happens next!? thats just plan out rude...

Posted 12 Years Ago

thanks you guys glad you like it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very nice! I like what I have read here. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Ooh, I'm hooked. Where's chapter one! :D Can't wait for more.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on September 18, 2011
Last Updated on September 18, 2011


Beverly Jane
Beverly Jane

Hello, wow! It's been a while since I have been on this site, it's almost like looking at a time capsule. It's been a while since I've had the same passion that I had back in high school for writing. .. more..

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