My Angel

My Angel

A Story by Beverly Jane

Love is pain; Pain in love.


Chapter 1: Death

   My eyes burned from the tears I could no longer fight. "What? Awh is poor little baby scared?" he mocked. "No," I mumbled. "My heart's broken," I roared pulling out my gun. It was as cold as the brisk air and even colder as I pulled th trigger. Did I really just do that? The shot echoed in my ears as it made a horrible sound going through his body. At first he stood motionless and, then he fell back a few steps. "I loved you," I whispered. "I know," he said smiling gently. "I loved you too," he said coughing on blood. "Then why would you do this?" I asked starting to sob. "Because, I knew this was the only way I could get you to do this so, you would be safe.." he said collapsing to the ground. My heart stopped at that moment.


It was then I realized what I had done.

© 2011 Beverly Jane

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Beverly Jane
This is only a portion of the first chapter. Please tell me what you think.

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really good
a few mistakes but still really good

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Hello, wow! It's been a while since I have been on this site, it's almost like looking at a time capsule. It's been a while since I've had the same passion that I had back in high school for writing. .. more..

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