I do
A Poem by Beverly Jane
 Short and simple. 
Love is pain.
Pain can be true.
Truth does not exist.
Existance is short.
Short timed.
Timing is everything.
Everything is him.
He is love.
Love him I do.
© 2011 Beverly Jane
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good format - liked the way you connected the last words into a new line. the last line too "Love him i do" - if you were to write one more line, i guess it would be athe wedding vow 'I do" :) but "truth does not exist"? - i dont believe that - the kind of love you expressed her is TRUE. if such a love exists - then so does truth :)
good read - i enjoyed it :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much. :D
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good format - liked the way you connected the last words into a new line. the last line too "Love him i do" - if you were to write one more line, i guess it would be athe wedding vow 'I do" :) but "truth does not exist"? - i dont believe that - the kind of love you expressed her is TRUE. if such a love exists - then so does truth :)
good read - i enjoyed it :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much. :D
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Added on December 18, 2011
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Beverly Jane
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