Forever Together

An acrostic dive into 'The Grave Tree' part five

Forever trees have grown
On hallowed ground to men
Rooting seeds death is sown
Everywhere stones are planted
Vast beautiful garden
Eternally marked by stone
Reaching for their heaven.

Together lives are seeded
Over coffins laid to rest
Graves and gardens weeded
Evergreens left alone
To grow the sky they crest
Hearing songs death needed
Earth and wood stone and bone
Roots of life stand the test.

2022

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Patricia]

oh yes! this is my new fav of the series! this is perfection! "Forever Together" acrostic poem, each line is beautiful ...love the line To grow the sky they crest and Hearing songs death needed, very beautiful and Earth and wood stone and bone....yes, you think of those things, well I do when visiting graves. excellent!

[William Michael Reeves]

Perfection! Now you're killing me with kindness in your plain care for my poetry. That might be my fav of yours because I've worked with so many nurses over the years. And I plainly care to hear more from you, and your vomiting pen. I may have a new poem or two that can cure what ails your pen. Slip it into your coffee soon!

Say, while I've got you. I saw the most amazing film last night. It was like all of our poetry and stories brought to life. Uncanny almost. The Fountain. Stars Hugh Jackman and Ellen Burstyn. If you watch movies much check it out. It was...amazing!

[Patricia]

I have not seen the movie but I looked it up on Amazon and I can rent it. When I have time I will pop some popcorn and give it a view, it looks good.

and you deserve the kind words for this one and all of them, very talented pen. :)

[Redding]

Very interesting poetry...

[Neville]

this is an exceptionally excellent example of this particular poetic model sir William .. bloomin treemendous in my most humble opinion ....................................... Neville

[William Michael Reeves]

Your opinion is humbling and valuable to me. And the tree! So in response here's another acrostic from Billigami...

Neville wrote something
Even I can't ignore
Validated my poetry
In a punning way
Lifting my spirits
Like flowers growing
Ego, now needs pruning!

Thanks Neville!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the line Hearing songs death needed! This is written beautifully! Your imagery really pops!

[William Michael Reeves]

The short lines pop like popcorn! Try one if you haven't. No real rules that I know of other than first letter spells a word and you are supposed to use that word to start first line. Kind of fun and easy. Thanks Kathy. Just jumped on for the day. Going to messages in a sec

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are inspiring me as a poet! You are welcome!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Sometimes this format can feel disjointed and forced. You did a excellent job letting the form create.
I enjoyed reading it. Very good.

[William Michael Reeves]

You hit it there. Thanks. This was the second time I tried this and did the same thing. Wrote the words vertical and just let it pop. I think the rules said you have to start with the word you are using and that helps get it going. Have you done one in your pages?

[Ken Simm.]

Apropos to today and authentically empathic. A splendidly composed piece of humanitarian writing.

[William Michael Reeves]

Well, thank you! When I considered all the different forms I wanted to write the same poem in for this series I wasn't sure what I would do for an Acrostic. This did write itself into a certain amount of profundity. Thanks for reading that. Read you soon.

Bill

[KAREN]

Your imagery is awesome! I love the meaning of your poem. (Forever Together)

[William Michael Reeves]

Thanks Karen. The original idea this is based on, and those two words are powerful. Alone the two say enough but stick them together and a forever of words seems possible. Thanks

Bill

[KAREN]

My pleasure!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

trees grow over coffins, so the circle remains unbroken...
for each death, new life buds...
the roots of life continue the line...
My ashes are going to be spread in a lake....
a place I swam in the fifties...
I will literally sleep with the fishes...
a well-done acrostic,
j.

[William Michael Reeves]

Thanks. Missed this review. Maybe you could get someone to burn some of your poetry and mix those ashes with yours. Then the fishes will have something to read. Have you written a poem about your plans you can direct me to?

[William Michael Reeves]

If you weren't already aware....I'm a little nuts. I just turned your review into an acrostic.

Fishes swim with my ashes
In a lake I plan to sleep
Swimming in the past I'll dream
Hearing music from youth I keep
Ears open for eternity
Spreading me throughout the deep.

Billigami

[Einstein Noodle]

staying the course aren't you?! :) ... acrostic fun but your themes and imaging holding true .. not my favorite but acrostics are not easy when bending to ones purpose ..
E.

[William Michael Reeves]

I don't bend Gene. I fold!

[Einstein Noodle]

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