Beat of My Own Drum

I dance to the beat of my own drum

I paint pictures with my toes

I sing in a made up language

And I believe stuffed animals can breathe

I paint pictures with my toes

on a sheet canvas blank and white

sometimes I'll dance for my own delight

I sing in a made up language

loud, proud, and sometimes off key

you could say I'm a little gutsy

And I believe stuffed animals can breathe

though I'm still unsure if they can move

it's something I've yet to prove

Author's Note

Trimeric poetry, I thought I'd give a try, though I'm still unsure if I did it right.

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

:) Such a sweet, individual, and artsy piece. Needless to say: I loved it!!! You write with such a natural...oh whats a good words for it....uniqueness and playfullness that speak on a more deep and emotional lever when one chooses to look deeper. Well done!! You do very well writing in this format:)

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you Mickey! I'm truly thrilled you feel that way about my works ^_^ This was the first poem I tried in Trimeric form

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem:) And this is your first in this format? It seems like you knew what you were doing ^_^

[Helena]

What a delightful Trimeric Emily! Yes, you have done it correctly and a mighty good effort at that! Thank you for submitting it to the contest!

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Nice poem, refreshing and pure. Life is a wonderful gift in your poem.

[zainul]

Fabulous write.
Love it.

[....]

I really enjoyed this, thought it was kind of cute in places

[Pax]

i think this can be a song. love the energetic feel about this one. its great.

[Arik]

I'm no expert, but I believe you did it right. As for the subject matter I found it lighthearted and relate-able, but that just might be because I'm a loon myself.

[Serenity Faith]

Loony people are always the most fun ^_^ Thank you.

[Skye]

I liked it, whimsical, cute, and happy go lucky. :)

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you very much Skye ^_^