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Knock

Knock

A Poem by BlackRabbit17
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What I've came to realize today, is that I don't have even a single friend who is a friend.

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In the forest I came,
Several hands in chain.
Hello, wilderness.
Goodbye, my smiling frames.
Now, I face a shameless mirror,
Searched for pictures to remain.
Only white space behind my mind,
Lone in fact of what is real.
 

© 2016 BlackRabbit17


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BlackRabbit17
Any critique will help. Thank you.

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wow! I'm amazed by the style of writing! This one is so good! i loved reading it! :D
keep writing :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


BlackRabbit17

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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Manila, NCR, Philippines



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