everything he says

everything he
says means
everything
thing to
me she
said

and
everything
he says is
better than
everything
i could
ever dream
would ever
be better
than everything
he says
she said

Reviews

[Sometimes Blood]

What a wonderful poem I've just stumbled upon. Everything worked, the rhythm, the flow.

[Mary C]

Very cleverly penned. i like it ! Touchingly simple piece with a great message.

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

This is what creativity should be like. Nice!

[Vita Rose]

I love a good tongue twister  with multiple meanings depending on how its read. Lovely.

[John Anderson]

Cleverly written and a joy to read. I really like this!

[Fornever Always]

Um, no offense intended honestly, but you lost me at "dream would." Though it may just be because I'm tired

[Tricia Pattinson]

Wow, clever poem and captivating read. Well done!

[Wandering Minstrel]

Lovely! The images in this leave a light in my mind! So softly-flowing, delicate and fanciful! I enjoyed this immensely!

[Anne Timmins]

This is enchanting and mysterious all in one. It sort of takes the reader to a new dimension

[Ashira Macy]

Fun little thought provoking tongue twister. Wonderful write.