Mystery Emotion

This sudden emotion...what could it be?

It seems to be there in utter falsity,

Seems to just linger and take over all of me,

Yet it certainly allows me to accept reality.

This emotion is not like the others,

Its complex simplicity places it under cover,

It's just rapidly taking me over.

 

I can't distinguish between its unexplanatory traits,

Don't no whether it's love,derpression...could never be hate.

I just don't understand why it's burdening my fate,

Shall tears start flowing...should I open the flood gate?

Shall I wait for it to come and devour me in my fear of the unknown?

To wait until this emotion has fully grown?

Should I nurture its traits into my own?

Should I look beyond what it has already shown?

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

You are amazing. This is another side of you. I can't keep count anymore. You can write about any and everything. I really enjoyed the story that plays out here. I think a future screen or playwrite might be happening among us. The lines...
Shall I wait for it to come and devour me in my fear of the unknown?
To wait until this emotion has fully grown?
Should I nurture its traits into my own?
Should I look beyond what it has already shown?
Speaks loud and is saying something. thanks for sharing.

[luke312]

Very Nice,it's well written and it displays your skills as a writer Great Job Charms

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Such a deep write, wonderful write as well, well written.

[Broken Warrior]

Ok, first, let me say im glad im the first to comment. This has left the reader wondering along with the writer. Great technique. Deep message and scene of struggle. Very deep once again but with an unfamiliar addition. Amazing construction charms. Gr8 piece!