What I Like

What I Like

A Poem by Blue Eyes

Summer air
Going to the fair

Butterfly kisses
And sweet wishes

Birthday parties
And eating smarties

Big smiles
Doing new hair styles

Picking seashells
Hearing church bells

Picking flowers
For many hours

Playing with a friend
Never wanting it to end

© 2011 Blue Eyes


Author's Note

Blue Eyes
This is who I am... :)

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I really like this poem! light, simple,profound all at the same time! smarties rule!


Posted 7 Years Ago


I really like the rhyming. Vary good

Posted 8 Years Ago


I bet that you are really awesome! And so is this poem.
Oh, I love smarties too! It's nice to know how talented you are to express yourself in such a creative way. Good job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this Tara! ;D

Posted 8 Years Ago


I LOVED IT! this is such a cute poem, reminds me alot of myself.. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good poem! I enjoyed the idea of writing a few of your favourite things! I know some of these are on my list! The smarties for sure, I love nothing more than a box of smarties!
As well as the church bells, that sound really is one of my loves.
An uplifting poem, nicely written!
Also I have a couple suggestions.
Maybe give it a few more lines, it was so good that I just wanted to read more!
And possibly change the line Never want to end- Never wanting it to end.
Just think those will help it! A wonderful write, you rhyme very well. You can tell these things are very close to your heart!! Keep up with the good stuff!


Posted 8 Years Ago


This is sooo Cute.... I love this poem. I like smarties too by the way the are awsome. and Church bells are my Favorite.... God bless you Great poem

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2011
Last Updated on March 5, 2011
Tags: summer, air, fair, butterfly, kisses, eating, smarties, big, smiles, new, hair, styles, picking, seashells, hearing, church, bells, playing, friend, never, end, fun

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Blue Eyes
Blue Eyes

Wonderful, SC



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