What I Like

Summer air

Going to the fair

Butterfly kisses

And sweet wishes

Birthday parties

And eating smarties

Big smiles

Doing new hair styles

Picking seashells

Hearing church bells

Picking flowers

For many hours

Playing with a friend

Never wanting it to end

Author's Note

This is who I am... :)

Reviews

[Mary]

I really like this poem! light, simple,profound all at the same time! smarties rule!

[Midori]

I really like the rhyming. Vary good

[Murtuza]

I bet that you are really awesome! And so is this poem.
Oh, I love smarties too! It's nice to know how talented you are to express yourself in such a creative way. Good job :)

[AIMEE]

I love this Tara! ;D

[Brittany]

I LOVED IT! this is such a cute poem, reminds me alot of myself.. (:

Good poem! I enjoyed the idea of writing a few of your favourite things! I know some of these are on my list! The smarties for sure, I love nothing more than a box of smarties!
As well as the church bells, that sound really is one of my loves.
An uplifting poem, nicely written!
Also I have a couple suggestions.
Maybe give it a few more lines, it was so good that I just wanted to read more!
And possibly change the line Never want to end- Never wanting it to end.
Just think those will help it! A wonderful write, you rhyme very well. You can tell these things are very close to your heart!! Keep up with the good stuff!

[Midday_Mystery]

This is sooo Cute.... I love this poem. I like smarties too by the way the are awsome. and Church bells are my Favorite.... God bless you Great poem