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A Poem by Life Is Blue
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A short poem

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Finding myself still loving you even though we broke up a while ago
As the only person i can't see
Can't meet
Can't kiss
I still want you
More than ever
Keep wanting you
Always distracted thinking
Of you
I'm sorry i always say the wrong stuff
Doing dumb things
Still can't stop thinking
Of you
Always and more than ever.

© 2011 Life Is Blue


Author's Note

Life Is Blue
Ignore grammar problems Honest opinion please

Best regards, MWoebbe

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Awesome piece :)
Keep up the good work.

~Namelezz~

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's kind of boring. I don't think you express your love good enough. May be it's just because you don't love her/him that much. But please go deeper and I will love to hear from you again.
It was cute. Thanks. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aww, this is a really good piece!
I like it!
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Life Is Blue
Life Is Blue

Brande, Midtjylland, Denmark



About
I'm 15 i think alot and at the moment i'm blue. Blue is some kind of deep sadness or depression. I like to wrtie about love agony and everything that i otherwise feel more..

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A Poem by Life Is Blue