Untitled for now.

Untitled for now.

A Poem by BowlofSarah

So much passion lies inside my soul
its almost as if I am going to explode. 
All I want to do is explore. 

Yet who do I have to share in my desires
I understand you 
but do you understand me?

walking on this moon lit sand 
wishing I could hold your hand
wishing we could share plans.

Instead I watch the water give me peace
and pray the feeling lasts a week. 
If you want to find me
You'll find me in my dreams.

© 2011 BowlofSarah


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Thank you, I am glad you liked it. It is untitled and thanks for the suggestion I may just do that :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


this was a very nice poem - i have no criticism for it because i like your choice of words and the story behind it . also is is the title actually untitled for now or having you found a title because you could call it shared understandings .

Posted 8 Years Ago


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BowlofSarah
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I am meant to discover something new under the sun. I am meant to induce change, I am meant to inspire people. Not because of any special ability only through the radical love i have to give. A love.. more..

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