The Mind

The Mind

A Poem by Brennon
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I was going through something hard. But.....A certain friend helped me through it.

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At this point in life....whenever I feel anything
I go into my head
A barren wasteland
I'm alone
Nobody is around
Or so I thought
Until I saw her
She walked toward me and helped me
She helped me out of the wasteland
To a beautiful place
I never thought that there was a place where someone like me could see
I thought I would die alone with nobody even noticing
It makes me feel like
I have a reason to live.

© 2016 Brennon


Author's Note

Brennon
It's just something that i said to that friend earlier. I hope ahe reads this.

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Hi Brennon. I love your poem! I love how the symbolism is kept to a minimum so I (the reader) could understand it better. Plus this girl must be special hahaha! Anyway I hope that you and everyone reading your amazing poems checks out mine! I can't wait to see more of your poems. If they're anything like this one they must be very special!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think it's nice. I had just found my reason to live again, but now it's gone. Again. I don't think she's coming back this time. :/ Love your poem, keep up the good work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brennon

3 Years Ago

You best not be playin meh boi. *squints playfully*
Andrew M Parker

3 Years Ago

Haha nah man. i'll catch ya later
Brennon

3 Years Ago

Later hater :)
Well written.. And I'm glad that you are okay now.
^-^

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi Brennon. I love your poem! I love how the symbolism is kept to a minimum so I (the reader) could understand it better. Plus this girl must be special hahaha! Anyway I hope that you and everyone reading your amazing poems checks out mine! I can't wait to see more of your poems. If they're anything like this one they must be very special!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's really beautiful :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brennon

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
This is another sweet poem. I really like the rhythm of this poem and the meaning behind it and how you written it was amazing great job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brennon

3 Years Ago

Thanks! At least I know that I'm being noticed by people!

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Brennon

Lancaster, OH



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19 in march, male, loves jacksepticeye, Pokémon, d&d, nerding out in front of others, messaging random people. You may be next! I made a nightcore mashup. Check it out if you want! Feedback .. more..

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