A Poem by Brian Kraklau

as i lay down to dream i wish for the next sun rise to be an awakening from a deep slumber, oh how i miss that deep comfort far into the wraps of my comforter, you see that window tonight, all full of frost, tonight is a great night of dreams, far in the recesses of our minds, so will we remember this i think not, for this is only for the moment, we love these sparks in the night, bringing the warmth in the cold, dark, night, oh babe i will see you on the morrow, when the sun rises tomorrow i will see, i will breath, and walk this night again. so goodnight and take it easy, heres a kiss goodnight for all you ladies, and heres a tip of the hat for all the bros out there, but if the night gets lonely for any of you fine babes, give me a shout, goodnight.

© 2010 Brian Kraklau

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I enjoyed this! There was a few minor of grammatical errors but it was sweet and simple non the less!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice use of words and you know interested when I see its your writing because you just have this mark. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

it loses it's depth with the portion "when the sun rises tomorrow i will see" and the words babe and bros. otherwise it is profoundly thought provoking, and surprisingly sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago

That's guyish.

Posted 13 Years Ago

A good way to say good night.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

That's how I feel at night. Sometimes I'm like, "Screw the day, it's the night that has all the beauty!" Awesome job!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Perfect poem for a perfect time! was just getting ready for bed after this one haha. good write

Posted 13 Years Ago

Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago

I like this :) Amazing :) Keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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44 Reviews
Added on December 15, 2010
Last Updated on December 15, 2010


Brian Kraklau
Brian Kraklau

Las Vegas, NV

just another human trying to analyze this reality from my own limited perspective. I'm here, there, and throughout each word i write. perhaps in time I could find myself within this mess. outside of t.. more..


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