A Love Story

A Love Story

A Poem by Bridger Hall

New song i wrote. Need a girl to sing it with.


Just a new boy, in a new town

Couldn´t sleep trying to figure his life out

He put on his shoes, and made is way to the car


Just a girl, crying on her bed

couln´t sleep with the song in her head

She trew off the sheets, and stepped onto the balcony


He drove and drove till the end of the street

Ran down to a lake and fell to his knees

He prayed to God, that he could find someone


She looked down onto the lake

Saw a boy sitting out on the dock

She prayed to God, that he might be the one


Could this be?



Love come´s baby girl then it goes


Don´t talk boy i´m so in love


And i can´t breath, can´t speak without you now


Pretty girl will you stay in my life?


I feel without you boy that i couldn´t survive


Oh this is worth it

I´m glad i stayed up tonight.

© 2012 Bridger Hall

Author's Note

Bridger Hall
Lacks second verse. opinions?

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This sounds really amazing! I hope you find someone to sing it with, cause it will sound amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love this! It's so beautiful, it's a song that paints this amazing picture in your mind. The girl seems almost like a shadow that softly weeps and the boy seems like someone in a fight with love, a constant struggle, it's so sweet. I think it would sound really amazing, especially with a boy and girl singer.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sweet and diverse, even for lyrics, which sometimes need vocals for them to make sense, a well placed piece, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago

completly amazing:) If you had lyrics for a second verse, it would be nice, but this is good too. In my un-experianced opinion. Found anyone yet? To sing with I mean. Would sound good.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on March 5, 2012
Last Updated on March 5, 2012


Bridger Hall
Bridger Hall

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