A Love Story

A Love Story

A Poem by Bridger Hall
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New song i wrote. Need a girl to sing it with.

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Just a new boy, in a new town

Couldn´t sleep trying to figure his life out

He put on his shoes, and made is way to the car

 

Just a girl, crying on her bed

couln´t sleep with the song in her head

She trew off the sheets, and stepped onto the balcony

 

He drove and drove till the end of the street

Ran down to a lake and fell to his knees

He prayed to God, that he could find someone

 

She looked down onto the lake

Saw a boy sitting out on the dock

She prayed to God, that he might be the one

 

Could this be?

Everything.

 

Love come´s baby girl then it goes

 

Don´t talk boy i´m so in love

 

And i can´t breath, can´t speak without you now

 

Pretty girl will you stay in my life?

 

I feel without you boy that i couldn´t survive

 

Oh this is worth it

I´m glad i stayed up tonight.

© 2012 Bridger Hall


Author's Note

Bridger Hall
Lacks second verse. opinions?

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This sounds really amazing! I hope you find someone to sing it with, cause it will sound amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this! It's so beautiful, it's a song that paints this amazing picture in your mind. The girl seems almost like a shadow that softly weeps and the boy seems like someone in a fight with love, a constant struggle, it's so sweet. I think it would sound really amazing, especially with a boy and girl singer.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet and diverse, even for lyrics, which sometimes need vocals for them to make sense, a well placed piece, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


completly amazing:) If you had lyrics for a second verse, it would be nice, but this is good too. In my un-experianced opinion. Found anyone yet? To sing with I mean. Would sound good.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Bridger Hall
Bridger Hall

Preston, ID



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I am from Idaho. I love it. I don´t appear to be complicated... But i am in a constant war with myself. I am a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints. I will never deny it. I .. more..

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A Poem by Bridger Hall