Sway

Sway

A Poem by Broken.
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Why cry anymore?

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I can't cry.
Everythings changing, its done, I'm done.
Why does it have to be this way?
What did I ever do to you?
And I'll walk alone but
I can't cry.

 

So much seemed so simple
Then it turned around and the bullet is on my head now.
I can't believe it would come to this when it only feels like the beginning.
never did anything to you
And I'll hang my head down but
I can't cry

 

I have your word
You remember your word?
That one little word that meant too much
Don't remember?
I'll refresh your memory
Oh, that single word
That you gave to me, JUST me.
And I'll softly say this word to you one day but
I can't cry

 

You seem to have feelings
That almost seems strange
When did you aquire feelings?
I guess the same way as I.
But you've hurt mine, you know that right?
And I will hurt yours someday but
I can't cry

 

The damage is done
It's over now
The screaming silenced
The passion dounced
Feelings hurt
It IS the end
And I whispered that word to you and walked away
with my head down but
I won't cry.
 

© 2008 Broken.


Author's Note

Broken.
Sorry, same poem I had before. I just edited the picture thing cause I'm OCD like that.

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Did I review the other of this sort?? Well, if I didn't, this is very nice.
Lovely,
Stunning,
Gorgeous,
like you, my dear!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


The solitude without tears, the despair to empty ears, all very vampire. I get the feeling it's not over . It reminds me of Japanese anime, the ending is so dark and final yet it fades like a girl walking slowly away. Again the slowness is a nice part of the forsaken, forgotten qualities here. Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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