Stay

Love - here in an instant, gone in a flash.

 

 

 

Lay with me and dream,

Forget about the world around us.

Waves crashing to the beats,

Our yearning hearts for eternity.

 

Enter universal imaginations,

Our eyes sparkle like the stars.

A burning lust of forbidden ecstasy,

Love lingering upon the ocean breeze.

 

Lock away our tomorrow's,

Bury them beneath the sand.

Say you will never leave my side,

Stay, even if it's just for one night.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem... Thank you for sharing.

[KAREN]

Enter universal imaginations,
Our eyes sparkle like the stars.
A burning lust of forbidden ecstasy,
Love lingering upon the ocean breeze.
So romantic!
Love the last stanza as well!

[CHRIS ANDES]

I can smell the darkness
good imagery
=]

[Poetic Beauty]

Those moments we desperately want to happen, if only once more, before departing.

[Lina Grey]

This reminds me of the song Chasing Cars by SnowPatrol, but this is more elegant and dreamy. I love the word choice and imagery, and it's just so full of emotion. Wonderful piece. Thank you.

[TPK Stories]

Such lovely words...

[Pratik]

Nice composition.. a poem that speaks about togetherness and love... these are moments we treasure always and how effortlessly have you replicated the beauty of these moments in these lines! Well done :)

[Lily Mae]

Beautiful and dreamy.. well done..xo