Rage

Betrayal.

I wish I could have you here

Alone, in my clutches

To drown you in the pain

You caused within my heart.

 

To have you as my sacrifice

As I have sacrificed myself for you

Only to feel broken and used

Like a toy for your entertainment.

 

Mercilessly engulfing me

In the flames of desire and love

And now I am feeling the burn

Cheated and utterly betrayed.

 

How was it? Was I on your mind?

As you exchanged the same bliss

A sinful embrace of love

And intoxicating passionate kiss.

 

Crimson red,

Consumed by the rage

Eating away at the kindness

I have always had within my heart.

 

You have burned me

For the last time

This battle, I will not lose

I will survive the burn.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

To the person I wrote "Lost in a Kiss" for, this is for you. Thanks.

Reviews

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

godd*mn nice good luck

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

Is is closed out quiet well. I would have liked to see more of an argument in emotions. Tough your description of nothing but pure rage makes a nice subject to.

You have a bad habit of capitalizing every letter at the beginning of a line ;P
A good piece. I'm not I impressed, but you did manage to hold my attention :) bravo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ouch!!!..."I wish I could have you here Alone in my clutches, to drown you in the pain"- Your words are raw and honest... mastering the art of emotion... I love it!

[KAREN]

Very nicely written. Your emotions and feelings were expressed right on.

[Dezzyray]

i can feel the intense anger on the poem! :3
i like this alot

[J. J. Nightingale]

Whew .. wicked burning revenge .. how sweet it is to let it all out ..

Strong emotion ... You go girl ! .... Jasmine

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Anger is such a strong feeling.
You vented out your feelings well.

[TPK Stories]

Exactly how I feel about my ex...good job....

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i love this, it had so much emotion and power. when love fails and your betrayed all you can do is get back up and prove them wrong.

[kathrina]

I love the emotions in it. :)