In My Church

relgious poetry, with my own little twist of reality.

There are no words,

No stories or sermons

Being told in the book

Of Him and His teachings.

 

Silent whispers and sounds

Of gentleness and serene life

Created by a higher power

Unknown to the human world.

 

Velvet breezes caress my senses

Overwhelming me with peace

As the leaves and forgotten spirits

Sway to their own symphonies in the winds.

 

In the power driven ocean waves

As the move against the gravity

Of the pearlish moon above

Beneath the solace of a diamond sky.

 

No matter the season, whereever

Or even the time of day

The creation of life and beauty

Shows ever more clearer.

 

In my church, He is everywhere

Letting imagination fill my empty skies

And replace all the negative feelings

In my heart with beauty and wonder.

 

Muses take control

Embracing my soul and I learn

I am what was intended

I am what was meant to be created.

 

There are no stories or sermons

To be told, to be whispered...

Just seeing and believing

The creations of a higher power

 

 

...beyond humanity's comprehension

 

Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

DAMN, you an amazing writer if i havent already said that...i like the poem and the beautiful message it shares...

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

once again, i enjoyed your descriptions of nature!
:)

[∂αʌ<..]

an exquisitely beautiful poem! i love it! :)

[Revery]

This is and will probally remain one of my favorite peices out of your work. I can relate to this so much and am pleased to know there are kindred souls out there. You write so beautifully. I especially like "I am what was intended I am what was meant to be created."

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful message of truth delivered here.......it is wherever we choose.....lovely

[Wolfwind]

This was a divine piece of poetry. It's lines bringing forward a feeling of serene bliss and esoteric enjoyment. I loved the images that came with each stanza. They came alive in the mind and seemed to caress the spirit in a three dimensional hug.

Wonderful Ink!
Aaron

[MetBySunlight]

I love this, so much beauty and truth.

[Seshat Nidaba]

Wow this was profound, I could feel a higher power. Especially in the

4th,
2nd
1st and 3rd Stanzas, really well written those!

My favorite lines throughout must be:

1. Beneath the solace of a diamond sky

[Gilad Levanon]

Another beautiful piece. I love the basic message here for me:
The "glory of God" exists in all creation, not just the creations of those that would seek to make a connection to God something that can only be attained through a certain conformist path. I believe that the wisdom of creation lies both in the church and in the world you describe in this poem. However, the message you convey is that the sermons and preachings of organized religion are not necessary to understand and appreciate the wonders of existence.

[TawnyBlueStar]

My favourite stanza:
'In the power driven ocean waves
As the move against the gravity
Of the pearlish moon above
Beneath the solace of a diamond sky.'
This is a beautiful poem :) I could see the religious and the reality :D
The nature imagery is amazing :D lovely