Destination Unknown

If you ever had the feeling of what you were doing and where you belong in this life, you'll understand this. My thoughts and feelings lately.

Lost,

In forever's nothingness.

Shadows of my weary loneliness

Taunting and teasing at my well-being

But in some way keeping me company.

 

This yearning feeling tugs at my heart strings

Wanting and needing to be somewhere

And wondering if this place I feel the need to be

Even exists within this lifetime.

 

I'm finding it hard to get there

As I walk this boulevard of broken dreams

Alone, as the questions of how long will it be

And if I can make it there alone

Swirling and twisting within my mind.

 

I find comfort in my quiet surrounding

As the clouds begin to open wide above me

The rain splashes at everything it touches

Showering me, and hiding these broken tears.

 

It has been such a long road this far,

So much more traveling to be done

Soon, I know time will reach me there

To my destination unknown.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

I have often asked myself what am I doing and where do I belong in this life and I am still running over this question. your poem was much felt. Great write :)

[Enigma]

Everyone has felt the same at one point or the other. But mostly, none of us know how to deal with it. Yes, the journey feels as long as life itself, hazy and uneven and the destination is not as we imagine it, it is different, unknown to us before.

Good work.

[Sometimes Blood]

superb poem

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Destination unknown........yes I know this feeling. Sometimes we wake and we know exactly what path to take and then others we feel incredibly lost. A beautiful poem.

[TPK Stories]

beautifully written....

[paradise]

just speechless right about now

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

WOW! so many can relate to that destination unknow! Very well written!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The destination is unknown...and this is a bittersweet journey you have taken me on. Truly moving.. (touches my heart)

"I find comfort in my quiet surrounding
As the clouds begin to open wide above me
The rain splashes at everything it touches
Showering me, and hiding these broken tears"~ This speaks to me in so many ways...
I find comfort in the rain....

A Superb write Ana Rose~

[Poetic Beauty]

I think many times we long to be somewhere else. I know I do but I haven't decided where that place is yet. When I am ready I will know where the universe/God is pulling me.

[Vertigoingnowhere]

this is really good!!! NOICE!