Greed in Times of Depair

Greed in Times of Depair

A Poem by Butterflymom

Money  profane while

Stomachs ache,  dying of cold

Lone winter year round

© 2009 Butterflymom


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Congrats on your great winning Haiku. Well Done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very powerful. What's that thing about good things and small packages?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful and profound haiku/senryu which speaks volumes

in so few words~ WeLL DonE !! and THanks for sharing this

in the What's your Haiku Contest

Fran Marie


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Im starting to see a pattern ! Poweful little pieces make for a big emotional punch.

Mr.Lopez

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow so much punch in such little words so it's true what they say less is more, and you proved that here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am a Licensed Clinical Social Worker (psychotherapist) that has worked in the field for almost 20 years. My experience is vast, and I've worked with diverse populations. My interest in writing is t.. more..

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