Soul searching

Some random free style stuff

I have been doing some soul searching
I’m diving deep into my consciousness
Wondering if everything I have done over the past year has been for good, or bad
My mind has become a strong fortress, so much so it’s a prison
I forced myself into the shadows because I wasn’t good enough
Too bad I couldn’t run away though
My mind was too strong to let me do so

My story is deeper than track
Every chapter I write has an impact
I need not flatter myself because I’m not illustrious
But I feel on myself as if I was illustrious
I run in my dream so I can win at life
As I drink from a glass that’s half full,
While I race a hour glass that’s half empty

I wake up from my slumber in a pool of sweat
Because I know what awaits for me…
I awake into a world full of the foolish
I where green because I envy them a glutton
Because life is easier when your glasses are rose colored
I only see the darker ends of the color spectrum to be the light
Because there’s nothing more raw than that

I lie and tell her I invented it Trey Songz
As I lie and say, “I don’t judge baby I keep it 100”
Because she’s a Nymfo and I have a Kanye sized ego
I lay her down like the muffin man
I fly her around like I’m a super n***a
I want to leave her but I’m addicted
Am I that bad, Am I that mad, or should I be glad?

I guess I’ma problem child

Reviews

[the pizza guy]

i like it

[Tia Sanchez]

Lovely poetry. I like your style.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Smooth there is so much in this piece of yours. One has to read it slowly. It dawns on you like a novel. I think this is an excellent technique you've got that should be developed to the full. congrats man!