I Dream In Silver

I dream in silver

Watch it shimmer, shine, and fade

Just like the stars in the night sky

Vanishing at the first light of day

When I dream, I soar amung the stars

The moon lighting my path as I fly

If I set foot on the ground, the silver stays

The stardust dusting my lashes

Turning a simple scene into a magical place

I laugh and sing, free in the silver dream

Not worrying about the "real world"

I fly amid the stars here, where no evil dwells

I dream in the soft, gentle silver, unafraid

Watch as the world rushes by

Just me in this silvery world of dreams

Vanishing just when I feel as though it's true

When I wake, I face the harsh light of day

But sometimes, when I'm lucky

A bit of dreamdust stays on my lashes

Every so often, when I've closed my eyes

Trying to shut out the world

A sliver of silver will find it's way in

When I open my eyes

I live in silver

Watch it shimmer, shine, and fade.

Just like the stars in my dreamy night sky

Vanishing all to soon with the day.

I look wistfully at the sky, eager for night

Then, I can dream in silver

I can soar amung the stars

Have silver make every scene magic

Trust the moon to light my path

To let me fly again

I'll laugh and sing, free again

I'll dream in silver.

 

Author's Note

Okay, not exactly how I thought it'd be, but hey, it never really is. Anyhow, I may re-write this later, so if you don't like it, go ahead and tell me, it won't hurt my feelings. Well, that bit taken care of, hope you like it and that you have a great day! (or night, I don't know when you're reading this)
Love,
CreativeCookie

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow sounds so Beautiful and Magical I love it.


I loved these stanza's lines.





When I open my eyes

I live in silver

Watch it shimmer, shine, and fade.

Just like the stars in my dreamy night sky

Vanishing all to soon with the day.



I look wistfully at the sky, eager for night

Then, I can dream in silver

I can soar amung the stars

Have silver make every scene magic

Trust the moon to light my path

To let me fly again

I'll laugh and sing, free again

I'll dream in silver.


Thank you for sharing this Magical piece.


I love your Name very Creative :)
never heard it before.



Blessings. kindred poet

[Criss ;)]

wow......it's totally wwwwwoooowwwwww......you made it and you really flown with me amidst the sky.........wow.......i liked this, neahhhhh.......i mean, i loved this a lot.
you made me refresh, i can't beleive on my eyes that i'm seein' you right now in front of my eyes in the sky....i mean over a moon with me......lol :)
great to hear, you though of me on this......wow......i enjoyed this piece, and i'd hope that i won'd b fall down when you'd b flyin'....lol from the moon.

you made so smile too n it's night here n i can relate or make some views that as you want to fly n you're flyin' with me over the sky..lol :)
you got me, it's really very enjoyable piece, i'm speechless here, don't you think, you made this piece for me very beautifully or with your much hard efforts ? lol, hahah :)
i love this, much...much.....much.....and it's totally wow.

you know what "cokkie", i'd add one more line where we'd be eatin' some "cokkieeesss" too on the moon....lol :) amidst the star's, n in a dream of silver night.
great write, you're so nice of you, you made it for us :)

hey,,...i've read your author's note, why you think it's not exactly good write...?
i don;t think it's bad one, i think it's a very......very.....very n very sweet one write.
i've read this not from my eyes.....hey....now don't think that i'm blind or i'm too old......lol, but i read this beautiful write from my heart, from my soul....now plz....dont steal my heart or soul...lol, sorry, i've one, yeah, but you can steal, beacause if you'll do, then i'd have two hearts in reply...(one'd b yours and one'd b mine)...hahahah :) (not offensive, sorry to hurt if i did)

you know what princess, i liked this

I live in silver
Watch it shimmer, shine, and fade.
Just like the stars in my dreamy night sky
Vanishing all to soon with the day.....totally suite on us...lol :)
and moreover the piece, the lines that ripped me are

If I set foot on the ground, the silver stays
The stardust dusting my lashes
Turning a simple scene into a magical place
I laugh and sing, free in the silver dream
Not worrying about the "real world"
I fly amid the stars here, where no evil dwells
I dream in the soft, gentle silver, unafraid
Watch as the world rushes by
Just me in this silvery world of dreams........wwooooow, totally wow.

i liked this piece much, i'd love if you made some more pieces' for me with you in dreams...lol ...hahah :)
you got me again by your good work....and thanks to notify me to read this awesome piece, i really didn't want to miss this piece, i wanna read some more about this, if yuo got some time then you can write your own one book on this, i'll help you to do this if you need. (it's my promise)

and as a suggestion, i wanna say, just dig it, i mean, start wokin' on your new stuffs that's "A book", on this tittle "I DREAM IN SILVER"....it'd be really a goodbook, if you write, i;ll help you to make this piece, you can tell me if you need some help from me to make this write more effective, as a singer, i can make + add some more effective lines here....thanks again to tell me to read this outstandin' piece...

so, right now i'mm gonna write this line on my update profile "I LOVE THIS POEM "I DREAM IN SILVER"....
you got me princess again, you are not a good writer to me, you're a skiilller (ok, fine not more than me....lol)....lol
hahah :)

you know what here in this piece i can find out that you dropped here your real feelings, i can feel your feelings....you've dropped here your realiyt, your dream, your life, your time, for a minute, i've bben thinking for a minute that you really are with me amidst the sky till i completed this read....lol
it's a great write, i can and i don't wanna forget this piece from my heart...from my mind.
if you don't mind i can write one song for you on your this tittle "I DREAM IN SILVER" if you got no problem, because without my good cokkiee's permission i don't wanna do anything for her...lol :) (hu...hhh ...!! Really...???? )...hahahahahaha :)
ahahahahahahaha :)
i'm laughin' ...laughin'...n laughin;..................hahah:)
omg.....omg......
i felt down on the ground from my bed....lol.... :)

anyway....that was fun (hope you enjoyed)
n really i'd love to write one song for you...if you really don't mind....:)

ok...."cokkiess", i think i've wasted your much time in this review...sorry for that....lol
thanks for being with me :)
it's lovely write that i've ever read.....and "I'm glad that this piece really made you think of me"......wow
it's not "WEIRD"....::) it's very cleared write...lol, i'm happy to read your this piece...that's especially for us.

ummm...ahhh.....i think it's time to have your "cold hug"...lol :0
*TIGHT HUGSSS*...

take care...bye for now...:)
great time....

ohh, i forgot my ratin' for you,
my reatin' for you for this piece, 10000 / 100 :)
(i know i didn't forget countin'g )...olol :)

[CreativeCookie]

I don't mind if you write a song about it, in fact, this started out as a song, but turned into a poem. That happens a lot with me, or the poem turns into a song. Nothing I ever write turns out like I plan it to, but sometimes I think it's better that way!

[Criss ;)]

yeah, well said, you're totally write here, i do agree with you, even i'm still on it...i'll let you know very soon, and i'm sure you'dtoo love to read my song :)

[CreativeCookie]

You're right , I would love to read it! Can't wait until I can!

[Criss ;)]

wow, great to hear from you that you've no problem with that/ Thanks for this kindness.
yeah, as soooooooooon as possible to me, i'd love to make a song for and only for you "cokkieeee", but i think you gotta wait for few more day's or may be week because i'm pretty busy from today and from today, hardly i'll get time to be here because my holidays've been over now and i'll be busy again with my subjects.....but as i get time i'll be here for you :)
but i wish you won't gonna be forgive me until i come here again with a song :)

take care and love you much "cookiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"'.........!!

[Blue Belle]

It's so beautiful! :)