Once and Always

Once a cheater,

Always a cheater.

 

Once a cheatee

Always a cheatee?

 

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to.

I was "caught in the moment",

And I couldn't stop myself.

 

My question is,

Will you ever find out?

Most likely not,

But I still like you no matter

what.

Reviews

[Ralphy]

You're so forgiving with that twist, but you caught me off guard with the like not love�nice touch.

[Jd Young]

Yeah. This poem was small, but twisted. Good kind of added quark to the writing.

Well done.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

the twist at the end was a shining jewel, and yes they never stop the bs..lol

[Flow]

Ha nice little twist... This one made me laugh and i imagine many don't know what is really up.

[Cassandra]

nice spin :) Upon opening the poem I thought it was going to be a love poem and then I realized it was an apology laced with worry and you can see the guilt in there. It's another faction of being a woman that people seldom realize, men are always portrayed as cheaters but here we have a woman who cheated and is wondering if her man will find out. I like the spin. I just wonder about that meaning behind the last line but it adds a certain whimsy that I enjoyed. Well done.. also I love the picture you put with it.