Lost (Formerly known as "Confusion")

Inspired by a compass I had just recieved from Aaron Maycroft. Title change is due to a poem already written by myself called "confusion".

The compass was helpful,

But how helpful are they?

 

Can they sail us out of

These waters?

 

Will this compass be enough

To get through to your heart?

 

Or will it just sail me out of

These waters?

 

 

 

Author's Note

eh?

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Sound's like a sailor's words. I like the new title. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[shadadakiya]

very sweet when it come's down to it we will need more than a compass you got that right ,very good write hugs

[Flow]

eh? LOL

What a timely poem for me as a compass points in all directions.

Your poem poses some good questions that everyone should ask in a relationship.

:)