Because Of . . .

Because Of . . .

Local Airwaves Dormant Days Were Forced To

Withdraw

Consulting Renderings Of . . .

Broad Banned

Connection Monitored Confluence Of . . .
Signings And Parcel Bombings At Best Of . . .
All Places Legendary--Wall Paintings Of . . .

(Confidence) Everything From “Reality”

Names Would Be Additional Process, Carved
Picture Palpable, Dispelling Widowed Orphans
Whose Mothers Show Progress Meeting
Demands Started Decaydes Ago

Intriguing Widest Release Of . . .

Siblings

Darken Settlements Overloaded Behind
Strong Performances Of . . .

Immune Interest

Ameliorated, The Speaker Returned Airporting
Touch Downs In Ceremonial Gesture Research

So Ubiquitous, That Drift Supports Seconds
Left Of . . .

The Early Momentum Path Past Profits

No Sobering Of . . .

Your Head’s Droning Cells Phone
No Doubt For Its Executive Calls
Its Decision Of . . .

Possession At The Center:

Residents’ Testimony Of . . .
Greater Watt Age Colleagues Of . . .
Second Study Of . . .
First Language Anatomy Of . . .
Monumental Effort Of . . .
Conscripted Wounded Living Legends Of . . .

Weight Lifting.

© Carol Maric
All Rights Reserved

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

Reviews

[Hawksmoor]

I won't lie to you...although this is very well done, in its construction and execution, not to mention a completely unique style, it went totally over my head. LOL. Gimme a while to think and wake up, maybe have a drink, and then I'll be back to give it another shot. By the way, you and I used to talk a lot, read each other a lot. What happened to that, may I ask?

Hawksmoor...From The Bleed.

[Ben]

I loved the originality of the format and the words you used were something so much more simple would have been suffice. You decided to take this piece to the next level and spend the extra 10 minutes it needed, for thought and for creativity to take place. I could definitly tell the difference..

Especially the urgent ending..

Ben

nice poem with a killer ending!!!

beautiful!!!

[Cade]

Very original format and use of words. Some of the meanings and expressions, to me, seemed subliminal. Maybe that's why some of the piece seemed to flow over my head, but that happens often in sophisticated pieces. Which, by far, doesn't take anything away from it. Just means I need to expand my little thought box a bit.

A good brain with no distractions can only create something like this.

Cade

[Kevin]

simply because I can't recall the last time Isaw the word Ameliorated used in poetry, I give you 5 stars!

[Sanand]

So un NYC. Please don't claim your from here. I usually don't comment but someone invited me to this site. You lack.

[Sanand]

So un NYC. Please don't claim your from here. I usually don't comment but someone invited me to this site. You lack.

[C Lee]

i love the originality of this, the line...

(Confidence) Everything From �Reality�

that was perfect....great job

[Jessica Gleason]

Excellent use of enjambment! I enjoyed it.... it may not have been deliberate, it might have just appeared in the voice you used for the piece, but regardless, it worked quite well!

[JC]

cool, reminds me of some experimental Burroughs stuff. dig it.

[Jennifer Fales]

Politics. Strife. The everyday... Life has become such a weighted, confusing thing in our modern times...

I rather like the structure - like a choppy stream of consciousness, or the dial picking up stations on a mental radio... the fact that I found it hard to follow, I think, is more of a reflection on the reader than the writer.