Stimmung

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Reviews

[Diánna Martin (b..]

I LOVED this.
This is so sad...so brilliant. I do believe that this is my favorite piece of your yet.

Eyeam all alone...
Starving eating my very owned thoughts

You make a reader feel, my dear. And from feeling comes empathy.
The brilliant construction of the deconstruction never ceases to amaze me.

[EGabriellS]

Wow. I actually got that! Cool. I really like it! :)

[LatoyaEvans]

This is amazing. At first I must admit I had trouble reading it. But the second time I got it. Great Work.

[{Angel Redd}[Formerly A..]

O My goodness....i loved it. I love you for requesting me especially, because now i can thank you for
the chance to immerse my mind into something i've never seen before. This was immensely inspiring
and moving to me...i shall keep reading.

[Johnny]

wow...
it made me appreciate the twists....

it also made me fool horror again at this modern world of 'enlightened' idiot we have to put up with still. ....// like MTV (empty V )

[Colin Ingram]

Firstly how do you achieve this broken format....my poems only paste from Microsoft Word and then align left...?? HELP.....anyway the format and the lexicon trickery in this was highly original and experimentally fractured; like a montage of memories in jumbled order; it definitely captured a unique vibe, certainly parts of it felt as though the stress of syllables was very, dare I say...Germanish?!?! It had an abstract freefall and thus provides difficult to critique without sounding like a guffaw; nonetheless - it was an engaging and gripping exercise in psychological syntax profoundity - says me...haha. Unique and excellent work, lingers long in the recess of my brain.

[The Silence]

You are your own vibe in poetic content and creative stimulation. I like how you've pronounced your own style in word usuage. I say 'rock on' with who you are....

[Robert Rumery]

That's unique. I like it.. It rocks!!!!

[Vincent Maltese]

Nice. i dont really know where to go on this one. i like the way u wrote it. it emphasizes SO mANY gOod stanzas. =) hope everything works out for the ebst... i better see this is stores.

[Gandré]

I am happy, that Germany didn't forget and didn't sign for the war in Iraq.
Very origin idea of the tree. There I have seen the author in you. Cute.
It was" Writerscaf�'s most origin idea" slick and fast moving!

Hopefully aren't you angry that I drop a line so late?
warm regards,
lara

[Short Stories, A Collec..]

Very nice. I think this poem could even without the layout. It takes some time to digest, but that's good. Makes the reader think, trying to figure out the various possible meanings. It's been a little while since I've read a poem that really makes me want to sit back and try to interpret it on multiple levels. It takes more than a casual read to get this one, I believe. I wonder, though,if the meaning is actually a simple one, when finally realized. Again, very nice.