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Reviews

[Ken Collins]

Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!

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Every single letter has its importance! Single seemingly insignificant details can hold keys mightier than both pen and sword � and yes � the world is held together by the mis-use of language! The margins � indeed � people often forget about them � the horizon of the dimension of paper, the book, the text � What happens beyond them? Does the thought dis-appear? Appear somewhere else? Where? Anyway � if it is it must be because it is (Parmenides) and all that is must have a spirit, its own life � nothing is ever innocent in that respect because all is determined by its own being and destiny �

[James Starnes]

While I found it hard to read standing on my head in some parts, I found it to be very enjoyable. :P Very interesting way to grab a reader :)

[Kelly D. Burris]

Very creative!
Kelly

[E. M. Murren]

Beautiful. Freudian philosphy put to art. The mirror image effect is stimulating. Well done.

[Derrick]

That was extremely creative!

[M.f. Cockrell]

One word...rad.

[Danne B.]

This is awesome! I never would have thought of something this creative!

[Eric]

I certainly hope so!

[Ian Fraser]

Your poems are so creatively done. I like the symmetry. I would have never thought to write a poem in this way. Reading your poems makes me want to write a structural poem like these. Great stuff.

[Ivy Louise]

this is the most interesting thing i have read on this site. thanks for your creativity.