Oh this is just amazing, Coralann...Very intense, fiery anger unleashing through
The depths of your soul! I'm at this place in my life right now, could very much
Relate to this poem.
Very accurate description of when one has reached
their limit, due to any kind of abuse, betrayal, after a while, you're left with no choice but to
Strike back, even if it's by silence, confrontation, or just cutting them out of your life
For good.
This write, gives us, the readers, a glimpse into your strength, belief
In yourself...a true survivor, kudos to you!
Back to this poem, brilliant use of rhyming scheme, and lyrical flow,
I had Megadeth echoing in my head while reading this.
Thanks for sharing, I personally found it inspiring and
I'm truly sorry that you are or were in this place.
Sends you positive energy and light! 100/100 (favs)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wow thank you Barrie Joy what a great review I appreciate it a lot.
Not bad. I wanted more descriptive details about how youve been previously mistreated, yet shook it off, but still not bad. I wanted more metaphors, etc, but nothing is wrong with simplistic bold statements.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Well we don't always get what we want I guess. Thanks.
Never back down !! it's not all about physical power, it's about heart and that's what makes you truly powerful. I've always known you were a warrior, acquired scars and faced many obstacles but persevered and now you're even more powerful with even more heart and the world better watch out cause, for Carolann this is just the start!
Kudos, you inspire us all.
I am Vulnerable
Broken
Strong and Fearless
I am all things to all people
Yet I belong to none
I am Elusive
Unknown
A whisper of things to come
I am a Warrior
In an endless war
Victori.. more..