Oh this is just amazing, Coralann...Very intense, fiery anger unleashing through
The depths of your soul! I'm at this place in my life right now, could very much
Relate to this poem.
Very accurate description of when one has reached
their limit, due to any kind of abuse, betrayal, after a while, you're left with no choice but to
Strike back, even if it's by silence, confrontation, or just cutting them out of your life
For good.
This write, gives us, the readers, a glimpse into your strength, belief
In yourself...a true survivor, kudos to you!
Back to this poem, brilliant use of rhyming scheme, and lyrical flow,
I had Megadeth echoing in my head while reading this.
Thanks for sharing, I personally found it inspiring and
I'm truly sorry that you are or were in this place.
Sends you positive energy and light! 100/100 (favs)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wow thank you Barrie Joy what a great review I appreciate it a lot.
this is a glorious piece of "f**k with me...i dare you" poetry. i love it. i was reminded of pat benatar's "hit me with your best shot"....and now it is stuck on replay in my head...a stellar write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Quinfinn, that was my favourite song in my 20's.
11 Years Ago
i actually got to meet her years ago and i can tell you this ....you would have loved her! what a la.. read morei actually got to meet her years ago and i can tell you this ....you would have loved her! what a lady!!! happy to read and review this for you....
love the emotion behind these very well placed words
not going to take it anymore-good
if you can't do the emotional or physical side-call the i.r.s. on them no one wants an audit...gives one time to think and get out
you have released some great words here they read so well I could feel them
thank you so for sharing
some one needs a treat,someone broke the last thread, stepped on the straw that bent the camels back, sand and a burr under the blanket,ears back and kicking Dowsett is going to give you a licking!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Haha very cool :) I'm not kicking anyone unless they try to kick me first, then look out :)
Whoa, this one is strong, raw, full of moxy...I kept hearing that song in my head....'I get knocked down but I get up again, you're never gonna keep me down'! Go you, nice purge here.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Frieda that song is a bit like my mantra. Glad you enjoyed this it was one for the girls who .. read moreThanks Frieda that song is a bit like my mantra. Glad you enjoyed this it was one for the girls who are tired of being knocked around. :)
11 Years Ago
This definitely goes to show, you can get knocked down but we're not broken! My pleasure. :-)
I am Vulnerable
Broken
Strong and Fearless
I am all things to all people
Yet I belong to none
I am Elusive
Unknown
A whisper of things to come
I am a Warrior
In an endless war
Victori.. more..