Those lips, those eyes.

Just words

(Thank you Tumblr)

                                    Those lips, those eyes

Blushing beauty laughed at my words. I told her. Her eyes, her lips. Only wish I hold dear and holy to be able to see and kiss.

Her eyes beckon me close and I dwell in her beauty of her eyes. Us holding kind silence content with the sea near and the contention of hands and heart.

She told me. I love your faithful heart and you have captured me in your passion for living and me.

She gave me sweet kisses and held me in warm embrace. I whispered. Those eyes, those lips. Sacred place and dream for a lucky man.

   John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Tumblr photo gave me reasons to write.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Probably, you are seemed like a Romantic writer who cares of women's beauty much more than their pleasurable nights. Sounds interesting. Very deep and poetic ...very poetic choice of your words is. Their, hair, eyes, lips and ... yeah, much more.. always soothe the heart & take men to anew world - the world of pleasure. Either you crush her real hard so as she could feel how ravaged it could be to be someone's salve or let her control you with full domination so as she could let you feel how wonderful it'd be to be in woman's heart if it's appreciated or admired as well with tranquility. Pure romance you've come up with!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the kind words. Woman make us know heaven or hell. Good to swim in both.

[Adam Adams]

"Women make us know "Heaven" & "Hell"? Sounds very astounding. I guess, women got ya the pleasure of both: hell and heaven ... cos, without passing through such zones, no one can bring what's meant to be savored. Very evocative you are. Ye - women bring both hell and heaven. Heaven for those who treat 'em right and hell for those who treat 'em wrong but, somehow, also "right", eventually. Even.. a woman's herself a s**t of both that a man nor men can hardly understand. Sounds interesting. You're quite thoughtful yourself ... it's good to read your "prose".

[Chris]

I felt the emotion of this piece... and feel I understood.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Chris. I appreciate the comment.

[Sabnock7]

a longing for affection is a sweet good night kiss

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice photo-prompted piece.
Most of us are being attracted to beautiful eys and lips.
Well-written

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. I believe the kindness and the warmth of the eyes make us feel safe. Thank you Dhaye for reading and the comment.

[Peach]

It's okay but it's a little messy in the organization.

[Coyote Poetry]

Just words using description. Thank you Momo for reading and the comment.

[Roselyn Rose]

such a beautiful and inspiring write dear Coyote. I can see the image of every word you have filled with such emotion and feel. You are an marvelous talent for me, I thank you for sharing your thoughts with Writers Cafe :3

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Bayari. I appreciate the comment.

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This so lovely, John. Such a romantic, you are :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I use to be. Old age have overcame me. I need to find the romance place again. Thank you Lynn for reading and the comment.

[Calamityofgin]

Oooooh! Sweet sweeet Johnny tiz pure bliss. Lost in ths...a great pic avv

[Coyote Poetry]

The picture gave me positive motivation. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[h d e rushin]

what a wonderful way to start the morning....timeless and permissive....wonderfully written
Coyote......dana

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I needed a light poem written.

[Terry O'Leary]

Aye... the eyes have it...
Pleasant to read!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Terry for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Aluring tale of passionate love.
Liked the sweet, romantic poem very much.
Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jyoti. I needed a lighter piece of poetry this day.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Then you succeeded sir, its beautifully light.
Very much welcome.