Lover, Lover, lover.

A rewrite

Lover, lover, lover

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

Leonard Cohen song gave me reason to write.

                                  Burning desire

Locked doors took us to the utopia of the embrace and the sweet kiss. Protected by the whispers of Leonard Cohen songs in the background. Love was new and you were my only need. Your gentle whispers of, lover, lover, lover. Let's become one in the cold of the night. Release the veil of protection and dance in the fantasy of where love is life. Life is love. I brought you close and kissed warm welcoming lips and I told you. We are dancing on dangerous ground of no return and I will risk everything for you. Love sealed with sweet kiss and embrace.



                         Lover. lover, lover.


You asked me to define love. I looked in your green eyes and caressed your auburn hair. I told you. True love is like a free river. No boundaries or limits. When love is alive. You find places of no return and seek new places where lovers roam freely and safely. She whispered. Lover, lover, lover. Allow your hands to show me I'm alive. Allow your lips to make me tremble and move with joy. Let's become one in our secret world and place. I brought her close. Allowed the night to become day. Holding her close and wishing to never leave our safe place.

                                Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[lightsong]

All Your pieces have Your deep personal touch, it feels like You are living a fairytale Your own words create, living alone in Your private world, somehow I feel deep sadness and wistfulness brush all the words I read till now, lonelinesses where You soothe it away with Your loving dreamy pieces... they all mean so much to You, not just something, I respect all of them, and keep them flowing "treasurely".

Happiest Blessings*

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my second ex...auburn hair, green eyes...a beauty...
we danced on dangerous ground for a few years...and then split....we meet now and then...and the ground is much softer and more pliable...
it is like our secret...we still care that much.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad you can meet the green eyes lady and thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, my friend. Love has no boundaries or limits and it flows like a river. I could almost hear Leonard Cohen singing as I read your words. So very romantic. Lydi***

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. I added the song.

[Lydia Shutter]

:) perfect!