The boardwalk

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The boardwalk...

The dancing Lake Huron surround us,

you are barefoot walking and your eyes of wonder,

studying the lake.

I tell you,

I love the simple days when we can feel the water against our feet.

The morning sun against our skin and

the world seem so far away.

Your morning smile and the 6 am hot coffee,

utopia for my heart.

You take my right hand and we follow the boardwalk to the end.

You whisper.

I love the great lakes, I love the morning silence.

You and I,

kindred spirits following the Port Austin boardwalk every morning and

seeking some calmness and some peace.

I love our mornings walks and I love you dear, honey, sweetie.

I tell you, I love you more. ...

Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Just Kim]

Such wonderful imagery in this write, enjoyed this write

[Coyote Poetry]

The great lakes. They are wonderful my dear friend and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Mauricio Montoya]

just these few words would capture any woman's but judging from this write she just any woman but one that come to mind when the sun comes up and the day begins to cherish every moment.
this is poetry in motion.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mauricio. Here in Michigan. Many small towns and beautiful lakes. You still can find quiet and peace still.

[Mauricio Montoya]

not here I'm in Emeryville CA its a small town but Oakland is right next door. enjoy ur peace.

[John the Baptist]

And nice ones indeed. The poem captures a moment of bliss with beautiful imagery. That we all could have such times.

[Coyote Poetry]

We can. We need to make time my friend. Happy New Year and thank you for reading and the comment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I hear the Drifters singing to this poem...
Love the ocean breezes wafting through the subject's hair.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

I need to drift some more Jacob. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Relic]

You've written a poem that displays 100% of your heart, Coyote. Water is symbolic of fertility and growth. I think that idea fits well in this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Fran Marie]

Inhaling the freshness
of this lovely piece so
tenderly filled with
romantic thoughts
simply beautiful


nice work

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Fran. Happy New year my dear friend.

[Fran Marie]

you re. s o welcome
Happy New Year John;

[Sami Khalil]

Your words come alive in romance with your settings and story telling. You must have lived life at large with adventures all the time...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami. When we are young. The taste of love is the sweetest.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well said. You are welcome.