Eventide

Eventide

A Poem by moog-drika

Twilight weighs lighter than daylight,
dreams to be fairer than a groaning night
of minty outlooks.

Painting itself with sober colors,
         it leaves a brighter attitude
triggering blue to exhale red,
         making the energy harlequin,
                            with a slight scent of dawn. 

After-effect observes how 
it lets violet twist with orange, how
it quivers peach and yellow,
just to underline its integrity and outshine popular hours.

© 2020 moog-drika


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Love the imagery of colors and scent and atmosphere. Wonderfully penned write. Tyfs

Posted 6 Months Ago


moog-drika

6 Months Ago

thank you so much. It really means a lot
Amazing use of words dear poet.
"Painting itself with sober colors,
it leaves a brighter fragrance
triggering blue to exhale red,
making the energy harlequin,
with a slight scent of dawn."
I loved the above lines. Thank you Moog for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the positive words. So glad you love it. Means a lot
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I did enjoy dear Moog-drika and you are welcome.
Melita Catalina Warren

2 Weeks Ago

Excellent description as in all your work. I really resonnate with this one since I am a painter.read more
This was lovely. I enjoyed the contrast offered within the poem and the descriptive usage throughout. Good writing, F.

Posted 8 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much for taking a ride to the write. Made my eventide. :D
Imaginative poem with frame of nature and message of beauty thrills me. Enjoyed reading this masterpiece. Great to have an eye on this poem. I got to knew many new words and how to mix with so much ease of creativity. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for all these positive words. They help me a lot to grow. So glad you love it. Mad.. read more
i love this .. gave me chills to read .. love the blend of word paints and scents .. i can see this poet painting or this painter writing poetry .. a real gift either way .. thanks for sharing .. really like the "quivering" "groaning" "triggering" and the "exhale" ... love the ideas behind this poem .. very creative .. thanks for sharing Moog
E.

Posted 9 Months Ago


moog-drika

9 Months Ago

I really love the blend of word paints and scents. You may find most of my writes having the same es.. read more
I love the imagery in this write, this is a very well written piece here

Posted 10 Months Ago


moog-drika

10 Months Ago

Thanks a bunch. So glad you loved it :D
Graceful poetry. The imagery is simply refreshing. Glad I read this:)

Posted 11 Months Ago


moog-drika

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for all these positive words. Made my day :D
Exquisite images in this. Your poem reminds me of my visit to Colorado years ago. You've detailed a lot of what I saw out there.

Great poem.

Posted 11 Months Ago


moog-drika

10 Months Ago

I wish I could enjoy it live. Writing about nature while being home is nothing but a pain sometimes... read more
This has a lovely rhythm. I have a tts plugin that reads aloud to me, so I can say that if it sounds this good with a computer voice, it will surely sound amazing with a human voice.

Posted 11 Months Ago


moog-drika

11 Months Ago

I can say that it will surely not sound good with my voice since I have got the worst one haha. But .. read more
Reminds me of a controlled experiment, one addition setting off another and another and.. colour this or that taking over from another reaction of say - yellow and blue flowing into green, How lovely this kind of eventide. More than likely begun by a defined dawn. But, time come.. almost suddenly, a careful slip and slide down between two hills, THEN! a sudden pouring of liquid colour. You've created such a subtle yet exotic sight in words, Think i'll sit and read this all day!

Posted 11 Months Ago


moog-drika

5 Months Ago

Honestly no words can express what I am feeling right now. Even thank you is not enough but still sa.. read more
emmajoy

5 Months Ago

You give, you share and it should be appreciated. Realised after adding to my older review, that yo.. read more
moog-drika

5 Months Ago

I envy your art of thoughts. Then again, I love losing myself there forgetting my canvas.

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Added on July 28, 2020
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