My Sapphire Sky

My kind of proposal. Looking for a good title.

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And when I'll kneel down, I'll make sure everyone keeps your five senses busy.

There will be the last bit of daylight to show you her most passionate panaroma. 

The sea will be playing your favorite susurration of waves just to serenade you. 

My sapphire sky will effuse hues from evening to caress your skin. 

The breeze will unfurl its freshly-stolen fragrance from the greens. 

And I'll be standing there, 

                 to offer my feelings,

                     all of my own senses to you, 

and ask, 

if you'd like to keep tasting my weird love forever.

Author's Note

Might change the title if I find something better.

Reviews

[Wyrn Tiger]

what can i say exept its great

[emmajoygreen]

You have given your darling a rainbow of love.. what could be more precious! Beautiful words, beautiful gift

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful lines. Touched my heart.

[Stella Armour]

There will be the last bit of daylight to show you her most passionate panaroma.

A lovely image here,it portrays deep passionate colours..

[duff]

This is emotional writing and its beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

Just to serenade
Playing your favorite
Taste my weirdness
My senses to You
Passionate panorama

[moog-drika]

Some random words that I casually glue together and make it a phrase haha

[Sami Khalil]

Titles to consider as you requested. Up to you.

[moog-drika]

Ohh okay okay. Thought you were highlighting some highlights..:D

[Sami Khalil]

::::: ))))))))

[Sami Khalil]

Can be good titles for new poems

[Ken Simm.]

Such a visual love story. I love it.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the praise. Means a lot.:D

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The sea will be playing your favorite susurration of waves."
This made me think. Does the ocean always play the same song?
Good poem. Enjoyed the read. tyfs

[moog-drika]

Glad to know it made you think something.
Seeing the ocean as a master of improvisation, I don't think it plays the same song. Rather its track changes with every tide and wave.
Thanks so much for the positive words.:D

[Brad Dehler]

Weird love forever. Intriguing and mysterious, reaching out to grasp love and intimacy. Well done, really takes the imagination

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for all the positive words.:D