Who is right? Who is wrong?

Who is right? Who is wrong?

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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In war. No-one win. The poor are the losers. How many great cities, how many homeless must we have before we learn. War is for land and the profit of the contractors.

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Who is right? Who is wrong?
Do we remember the reasons for war? The victor can remember and the dead people/ dear cities and homeless have no place to go and they are angry.
Palestine Hamas send men to kill and they murdered 1300 people in Israel. They killed innocence people. Hamas told the world. No Jew should live. They believe they are right. Palestine people have the right to demonstrate, imprison in their own country for 15 years. Hamas had accepted war and death. No concern for the people of Palestine.
Israel striking back. Destroying and misplacing two million people. Israel was attacked and their leaders promised to kill every Hamas man and women. All Hamas must die.
If you swim in deep hatred and revenge. Hate will eat-up your kindness, revenge will make you blind. Who is right? Who is wrong?
Both sides have done inhuman things. Misplace people, stole land, murdered and accepted separation. Who will win? When great cites become a large tomb for the people in their country. The dead cannot speak. The living must scream and demand. Stop the war, stop the bombing.
I was a soldier and I understand. You attack me. I will fight back.
I also believe. If you beat a dog enough. The dog will bite back.
The Middle East. Who is right? Who is wrong? 
Men have fought since the beginning of time. And we cannot understand.
No-one win in war and the dead are quiet.
Please stop the bombing in Palestine. How many dead must be counted before we learn?
We need strong leaders to attempt to stop war and do not accept side. If both sides are wrong.
Who is right? Who is wrong?
How many people die before we learn?
No-one win in war.
I wonder when the last man is standing alone.
War had killed everyone.
He will ask the night.
Who won.
No-one did.
Coyote

© 2023 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
We don't want a world war, my friends.

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Coyote,

Well expressed words of wisdom here. War is like its sister: Religion. And in the Middle East, it is Religious Madness that is causing the current, ongoing war. In a world that claims to stand against Racism (White Supremacists) and all forms of Culture, Race, Gender, Discrimination, the very people who utter such protests against this and against that with nifty slogans are prisoners of their own religion's disposition that does stand diametrically opposed to all of which such individuals claim to be dead set against. All Religion, is covert disguise for an assumed, taught, and acquired stance of position of none other than Supremacism; a loftiness of mind that causes one to feel better about oneself, whilst, judging, proclaiming, and assuming that those who do not reside within one's holy realm of religious clique, sect, denomination (extreme of uppity snooty higher class plane of existence rendering one as above and all others as definitively below, giving life to that attitude of better than thou-ness) are, somehow of some way, lesser individuals and less deserving of good and Life than are you and those who do reside within your select cliquish preferred as professed form of Organized (for what War?) Religion.

Someone will shout: "It's not so!" But it is so, and peoples words and writing affirm that such a reality is so. Words like: The Jews are God's Chosen People (words which do serve to set them upon a higher plane of existence in relation to other Religions who are also Human Beings), Christianity's stance of only one path to Salvation as a Jesus who died for all men, even nonbelievers, and so the very words of, "I'll be praying for you brother, that God open your eyes to the truth," are, in fact, said as indicative of a mindset that deems itself as saved and well above those who are deemed as lost. Islam relegates all nonbelievers as Infidels, which is pretty much self-explanatory and (in view of the RCC's, The Inquistion, which is actually not over though the name upon the door of said department has been euphemistically changed and altered so as to not cause attention to its true as always purposes that is seldom mentioned these days as per Cullen Murphy's [a Roman Catholic)] excellent book, God's Jury: The Inquisition & The Making Of The Modern World) is but a more openly (today that is, because few Christians are privy to the fact that more Jews have been slaughtered, historically, beneath the banner of the Cross than any other banner, religion, or cause in the history of planet Earth) fanatical expression of openly blatant Supremacism than, currently at least, are the other two popular forms of Organized-Religion.

Ultimately, Man's inherent tendency to think, organize, and operate in a Supremacist Methodlogy's Mindset most always centers, or begins, around matter of Religion, to then move on towards areas of Bloodlines, Ethnicity, Gender, Intelligence, Physique, Culture, Language, Complexion's lack or presence of color's pigmentation of skin, and politics, ideology, and even matters of that which Human Beings choose or do not choose to eat as food (Pork or other things considered as unclean by some, Meat in general, and, or, a Vegetarian Lifestyle).

I am not one who attests that Religion should be outlawed nation or worldwide, as I support every Human Being's right to Freedom of Religion, to believe or not believe; to worship or refrain from worship.

So what is my point? I write and teach against Organized-Religion. Why? Because much of that which is taught is manmade rubbish and lies that are the cause of many wars. What do I seek? To cause people to come to realize that their given faith and religions must be amended, altered humanely, in such ways that allow them their freedom of belief and worship, without infringing upon the rights of others a members of different beliefs, faiths, and religions. And all of that mouthful said and done in a way to wherein no Human Being is considered as less or lower than is another Human Being, and in such a constructive manner that extinguishes and nullifies that seeming Man-Inherent tendency which witnesses devout religious men committing heinous acts of murder against their fellow men in the name of their given God, Religion, nation, or concept of ideological Freedom ...

Please do read my article titled: That Which Non-Jewish Folk Need To Know In Regards Israel & Gaza's Palestinians: https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mtcflynndegraham/2867755/

It's time to end the insanity, as you have so well said, my friend!

Marve


Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

4 Months Ago

Can't say that I agree with your expressed thoughts, but I do respect your shared point of view. Ni.. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Thank you Marvin. Once I clean-up death valley. Men in pieces we gave morphine to die easier. No-one.. read more
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

4 Months Ago

Coyote,

Actually, in my last comment, I was speaking and referring to albee in having.. read more



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Excellently expressed. Nobody wins in war. People die, life is disrupted. Homes are destroyed. Great write and read.

With love

Matthew

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Thank you Matthew.
This reminds me so much of the old movie War Games with the computer that could learn and finally saw that in war “the winning move is not to play”.

Winston

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

We live in a sad world my friend. Accepting war as norm. I appreciate the comment.
“how many seas must a white dove sail till she sleeps in the sand…
How many times must the cannon balls
Fly, before they are forever banned?
The answer my friend is blowing in the wind…”

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

I agree my friend and thank you for the comment.
Coyote,

Well expressed words of wisdom here. War is like its sister: Religion. And in the Middle East, it is Religious Madness that is causing the current, ongoing war. In a world that claims to stand against Racism (White Supremacists) and all forms of Culture, Race, Gender, Discrimination, the very people who utter such protests against this and against that with nifty slogans are prisoners of their own religion's disposition that does stand diametrically opposed to all of which such individuals claim to be dead set against. All Religion, is covert disguise for an assumed, taught, and acquired stance of position of none other than Supremacism; a loftiness of mind that causes one to feel better about oneself, whilst, judging, proclaiming, and assuming that those who do not reside within one's holy realm of religious clique, sect, denomination (extreme of uppity snooty higher class plane of existence rendering one as above and all others as definitively below, giving life to that attitude of better than thou-ness) are, somehow of some way, lesser individuals and less deserving of good and Life than are you and those who do reside within your select cliquish preferred as professed form of Organized (for what War?) Religion.

Someone will shout: "It's not so!" But it is so, and peoples words and writing affirm that such a reality is so. Words like: The Jews are God's Chosen People (words which do serve to set them upon a higher plane of existence in relation to other Religions who are also Human Beings), Christianity's stance of only one path to Salvation as a Jesus who died for all men, even nonbelievers, and so the very words of, "I'll be praying for you brother, that God open your eyes to the truth," are, in fact, said as indicative of a mindset that deems itself as saved and well above those who are deemed as lost. Islam relegates all nonbelievers as Infidels, which is pretty much self-explanatory and (in view of the RCC's, The Inquistion, which is actually not over though the name upon the door of said department has been euphemistically changed and altered so as to not cause attention to its true as always purposes that is seldom mentioned these days as per Cullen Murphy's [a Roman Catholic)] excellent book, God's Jury: The Inquisition & The Making Of The Modern World) is but a more openly (today that is, because few Christians are privy to the fact that more Jews have been slaughtered, historically, beneath the banner of the Cross than any other banner, religion, or cause in the history of planet Earth) fanatical expression of openly blatant Supremacism than, currently at least, are the other two popular forms of Organized-Religion.

Ultimately, Man's inherent tendency to think, organize, and operate in a Supremacist Methodlogy's Mindset most always centers, or begins, around matter of Religion, to then move on towards areas of Bloodlines, Ethnicity, Gender, Intelligence, Physique, Culture, Language, Complexion's lack or presence of color's pigmentation of skin, and politics, ideology, and even matters of that which Human Beings choose or do not choose to eat as food (Pork or other things considered as unclean by some, Meat in general, and, or, a Vegetarian Lifestyle).

I am not one who attests that Religion should be outlawed nation or worldwide, as I support every Human Being's right to Freedom of Religion, to believe or not believe; to worship or refrain from worship.

So what is my point? I write and teach against Organized-Religion. Why? Because much of that which is taught is manmade rubbish and lies that are the cause of many wars. What do I seek? To cause people to come to realize that their given faith and religions must be amended, altered humanely, in such ways that allow them their freedom of belief and worship, without infringing upon the rights of others a members of different beliefs, faiths, and religions. And all of that mouthful said and done in a way to wherein no Human Being is considered as less or lower than is another Human Being, and in such a constructive manner that extinguishes and nullifies that seeming Man-Inherent tendency which witnesses devout religious men committing heinous acts of murder against their fellow men in the name of their given God, Religion, nation, or concept of ideological Freedom ...

Please do read my article titled: That Which Non-Jewish Folk Need To Know In Regards Israel & Gaza's Palestinians: https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mtcflynndegraham/2867755/

It's time to end the insanity, as you have so well said, my friend!

Marve


Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

4 Months Ago

Can't say that I agree with your expressed thoughts, but I do respect your shared point of view. Ni.. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Thank you Marvin. Once I clean-up death valley. Men in pieces we gave morphine to die easier. No-one.. read more
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

4 Months Ago

Coyote,

Actually, in my last comment, I was speaking and referring to albee in having.. read more
It’s both sides I cry for
All the innocents
Of course the terrorists must be stopped but so many innocents die in process eh which is sadly terrible It’s the evil idealogy that needs wiping out too !
Good brave write John
I pray to God for peace ☮️

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

Me too dear Julie. We don't need a WW3. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.
Coyote
Here is another way some people look at things ( not me):
Might makes right.
Native Americans found that out. Palestinians found that out when the Zionists took over the land(after 2000 years), other people found that out.
You have to dig deep in history.
It seems
Might makes right

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

I don't know Sami. Like in the western days. Biggest and best guns will win. It is a mess my friend.
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

All true and well said
Coyote
You speak truth to power
I hope the world can hear you clearly.
Long, bitter history of wars and counter wars.
We pray for peace and a peaceful, just solution.
War crimes from all sides. Civilians are always the victims, dying in the thousands.
Genocidal wars since the beginning of history.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are right Sami. Men love war over peace. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Sami Khalil

6 Months Ago

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome
Power, money( war is big business), greed, energy, resource.. read more
Johm, this is a courageous piece of writing -. because you have stated both sides of the evil of war and especially the one you're alluding to. For time immemorial there have been pockets of long running hatred and evil between certain lands. Each generation is insanely inspired to pollute the next one, during which the most evil is born. Peace never has been easy because discussion - such as it might be, becomes argument. As an ex- soldier you - like millions of others have seen what war means. Your final words says more than.. ..

'No-one win in war.
I wonder when the last man is standing alone.
War had killed everyone.
He will ask the night.
Who won.
No-one did.'

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Our world is in chaos. I hope for better days. Thank you dear Emma for reading and the comment.
hi coyote, please do read my chapter war between good and evil, maybe you will get clue.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Okay Jessy. Thank you for reading and the comment.

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