Twisted City         Part one

Twisted City Part one

A Chapter by Coyote Poetry
"

Never underestimate fate. When we swim in sin. The Devil may find you.

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Twisted city


        ( Men with evil and cold hearts they believe they are invincible in this twisted world. There are men with a different kinds of hate and violence. They can see into  the souls of the Demons who are roaming. These men are waiting to cut them down and sent the Demons into hell.)

 



The Greyhound is speeding down the highway to the city of Angels.
The bus has only a few passengers coming from Salt lake City.

 Many of the them wake up when they see the lights of the city coming closer.

John Coyote is in a deep sleep.
 Bad dreams dancing in his head.
 He is standing alone surrounded by spirits asking him to come home.

Coyote looks at his hand.
He is holding a bloody blade.
He screamed out like a wild beast to the sky.

He awaken and he see the light of the Los Angeles in the distance.
He always loved the city.

He got off the bus and walks into the city.



  The city was always alive.
 People roaming everywhere.
 Most of them has no place to go.

They were alone and afraid.



The not so bad temperature of Los Angeles offer a warm climate
and a  safe place to hide.


Coyote like to watch their eyes.
 Some were full of fear. Most wanted or needed something.
 He worn old clothing and never shaved  when he was roaming..
He wanted to be another poor man roaming like a invisible ghost in the mist of people.

 He decided to stop and watch the people of the night.

Two young girls caught his attention.
They were wearing short skirts and tight blouses showing firm young bodies.

They were young and he knew the stories of bad homes.

Too many rules and no freedom.
 Go to L.A and become famous.

He watch as a large white man walks up to them.
 He taps them hard on their heads.
Tells them make more cash than yesterday.
 If  you don't you will be punished.
 The young girls looks afraid and shake their head in affirming they understood.

The man walks away.

 Coyote see one of the girls hugs the other girl
She whispers we will be alright.

Coyote decide to talk to the young girls and see what he could do.

 He felt hate rising in his heart for men who abuse and destroy these girls.

Coyote walks up to the girls.
He asks how are you?

The girls ask what did he want?
 He told them he wanted to buy them food?
The oldest looking of the two said we can't.
 We are working.

Coyote bring out a wad of money and tell them I  will pay you for your time.

He takes them two blocks away.
Tells the girls to order anything they desire.

The girls were afraid.
They didn't know what Coyote wanted.

He ask them what were their names?
The girl with the long black hair tells him my name is Susie.

 I'm from Houston and this is my friend Peggy.
She is from Michigan. 
Susie smiles and tells him they call me KC here in the streets.

He ask them how long have they been in LA?
Susie tell him I been doing tricks for two years.
 I will be sixteen in a week. 
Peggy is pretty new and isn't doing so good.  
 
The girls quit talking because the pimps keeps them drugs up and weak.
Both of the girls ate quickly and in silence.

Coyote felt anger grow in his blood.
He wished he could help the girls.

Peggy a natural beauty.
Full breasted and strawberry blond hair.
She asks what do you want from us?

He ask would you escape if you could?

Susie tells him, I screw up and ran away.
 I don't know how to get out.

Poor Peggy was my fault.

She has no place to go. I brought her into this hell.

Took her to my pimp.

He drugs her and rape her. We are invisible now.

My pimp Tom would kill us first before allowing us to leave.

Peggy has tears in her eyes.
 Whispers I want to go home to Michigan and see my family.


A dark shadow overtake the table.
A large white man with shining gold teeth stood looking at Coyote.
 He tells the girls get up and go to work now.
 
He asks Coyote what are you doing with my girls?
 He smiles and tells  him.
 The girls were hungry and I'm willing to buy them for the night.

He hands twenty new 100 dollars bill to the pimp.
The pimp takes his  hand as he put a wad of money in his pocket.

My name is Tom.
His eyes were shining now.

 He turns and tell the girls do what this man desire.

Tom tells Coyote come to my private place.
The girls know where.

Coyote smiles and ask do you have a sauna?
Tom smile and said enough room for three.
  I  want the girls to take you around the world buddy.


Coyote goes to the bathroom.
Sit and bring out  $10,000 out of his belt-storage.
He has only $1000 left.
He thought s**t I will need to go to the bank tomorrow.
 He sit on the commode and his mind began to sing softly.
 So much to do, no time to do it.
So much to do. No time to do it.

The girls looks frighten.
They tell him Tom will kill him.

Coyote smiles and ask do you want to escape for real?

Peggy begin to cry.
She ask is It isn't possible?

  Coyote tells them all things are possible.

Susie ask what you got a lot of money or what are you a saint?
 He tells them he was no saint.

At the airport he buy them new clothing.

They come out of the bathroom looking like normal 16 years old girls.
He hands them a package.
 Both girls were dreamy eyes and didn't believe what was happening.

He told them there was $5,000 in each package.
He tells them forget what happen in L.A and promise never to come back. 

And I need one more thing.
I need the address of Tom.

He hugs Peggy at the airport check point.
Tells her we all make mistakes and just learn from them.

She tells him her grandmother would be waiting for me.
Thank you.

As the Taxi drove into the city.
He prepare a drug and filled two needles.
The song rolled in his head.
 
So much to do and no time to do it.
So much to do and no time to do it.

He gets to the city.
He get within a mile of Toms apartment.

He walks quickly and see a condominium.
 
His anger rises as he think of those girls.
 Hungry and drugs up living in the streets.

He walk up the steps and knock on the door.
Tom open the door and ask where was the girls?
 
Coyote tells him they are coming in a minute.

Tom walks outside and look around.
 He ask was he a cop?
 He tells him far from it.

Tom invite Coyote in and ask how much money did he have?
For wasting my girls time I want $2000 more.
Or I will kill you.



 Coyote smile.
 Tells him he will be paid for his girls time and more.

 This morning you will get paid for all your bad deeds.





                                



       Coyote

                                     1988

 



© 2010 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Part one of a book I wrote in the peace of Santa Cruz. Good days.



Featured Review

a very good and great written chapter...
i love the way you made your conversations, how you transit from the conversations with the girl to your own thoughts!
and the fact that you are remembering a past event adds a new spice to this chapter...a touch of antiquity which to me is wonderful...im eager to read more now!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great start! There were a few typos I saw in this, like the one below:
Night has** taken** over the old city.

Mostly things like that. Other than that, absolutely fantastic job. No one on this website, or anywhere, writes like you. Fantastic work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem as a story, I like it a lot! Scary things go on in the dark streets, or even in broad daylight. A lot of the time, rescue is needed. I really felt for the girls in this story, which made me glad that Tom will get his comeuppance.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Full of mystery, makes me want to keep reading!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great approach.. Like it..!!

Good Wishes..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Off to a good start with this chapter....I'm in love with the main character. Yes, more descriptions are needed so you may want to take your time to add more details and correct grammatical errors. But everything you have is good!! Interesting story so far :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A bitter sweet alliance with people unknown by both of us, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wanna know where how the Coyote in the story had so much cash and what his story is. There's a lot of mystery surrounding him. Also why use yourself as the main character of the story?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Is this true? When you began I thought you were talking about the war you were in. I love reading bout your life, always fun.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:):) I LOVE it! A lot. It's a really captring story. :)
Will def read more. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very interesting story, its really captivating and engaging. Awesome job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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