The dance of emotion

Life is fair. We must give to receive.

  The Dance of Emotion.
 
A sweet angel was waiting on the bed for me.
Her skimpy negligee showing silky smooth skin.
She told me. "Come to me please."
I went to her and sat close to her.
 
She desired proof of love.
I traced her body with my fingers.
Her perfume create a havoc.
I desired to taste her tender skin.
Ravish her voluptuous body.
 
I whispered. "All I can give to you is a rendezvous of a misguided man with the desire of illicit and raunchy sex.
I had a meltdown in the emotion of love.
Nullified my heart so long ago."
 
"My only redemption is my desire not to teach you the melody of tarnish words and leave you alone in the seize of hate and loneliness."
 
Beautiful brown eye woman smiles.
 Kissed my hands.
She brought her face to my face. Gave me soft and warm kisses.
She whispered.
 
"We are pure for a moment and treasure perfection in love are only shadowed dreams now. Love is a sham."
 
"Now pride and savor love are precious only to young girl dreams.
I want someone to ignite my soul.
I need naughty and sordid nights of passion."
 
Sometime the prelude to the story is written.
The rise and fall of our heart must surge or what is left?
 
I touch her  silky skin.
Watched the stirring of her  beautiful body.
I stroked her long legs and brought them across my lap.
 
In the trance and solemn light of candle lights.
I kissed her  tan shoulders.
I stripped and lay on the bed.
 
She  straddled me.
She whispered.
"In the misguided game of love."
 
"The saga must go on till the story ends in happiness.
Or at least we will have sweet dreams and memories."
 
                        Coyote
                        22 March 2009
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem when I was younger and life was a open road. Any mistakes I would be thankful for the help. A wise person accept help with thankfulness. Someone was kind enough to assist.

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

I am not used to you writing about such things.You should walk on the erotic edge more often.You are good at it.I don't get the love is a sham part though.I do not think the love was a sham even if it was only the once you loved it.take the love is a sham part out cause it is wrong and it does not go in this poem.all is love

[Audrie]

I whisper that all I can give you in rendezous as a misguided man with the desire illicit and raunchy sex - - - wow - I love the truth in this line

[Gandré]

Love is frequently understood to be a powerful emotion. It seems to involve both intense attachment to an love object and a high appraisal of the value of the love object. Your poem is alive and vibrant, and yet it is slumbering somewhere in the calmness by the way how it makes to feel me. Another wonderful poem.

[HorrorMaster]

excellent poem, i love it.

[Star Wolf]

Two people reaching out to find love and compassion from each other.

[Jessica Mai]

Your writing style is so pure and raw. Another beautiful piece of work. this poem reminds me of a poem i read before called The Robot by Michael Mack. Just thought i'd tell you since i really like that poem and i think you might enjoy it too :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Coyote, so sensual..sometimes maybe we need someone to just feel close and connected with even if only for awhile. This is not the route to take but it happens.
You have a very nice poem here .. loved it.

Chloe

[Soul Magic✯]

this is beautifully written from the heart and soul. your ink is amazing as always... loved the way you tell the story in this piece. i enjoyed it... stay hot bro

[Art]

Nice work...to dream and love together is to feel the emotion of reality...even in dreams we are tossed into that sensual escape of desires...

nice...

[Tate Morgan]

Oh the open road of youth and endless are the turnoffs along it Beautiful thoughts

[Poeticpiers]

there is great deal of difference between mere sex and sharing love. The young mistake passion for love and thereby hangs a tale.
You learn as you grow older sex is only the icing on the cake