A mad man prayer

A mad man prayer

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
"

Love can create a madness.

"
                              
                           A mad man prayer

I woke up with your name on my lips.

THE PHONE IS RINGING.

I dreamed you were calling me.
Bringing me into the heat of your flesh.
Calling my name.
Whispering words of love.

Sweet words.
Thanks for the education of the long ride.

I awake.
Sweating and full of hate.
Not wishing to touch you.
But to hurt you like you did to me.

I make plans to see you.
To find you.
Then the hate seem to fade away.

I pray to be able to fall into your arms.
For you to twist up my mind and heart again.

Make me your slave again.
I would serve you.
For you are what I need.

I fall asleep again.
You come into my dreams.
You are so beautiful.
So sweet and innocence looking.

THE PHONE IS STILL RINGING>

I see myself.
Being drowned in cement till I'm buried.
Unable to breath.
I won't cry out for help. I will watch you pour the last of the cement.

I will wait for my last breath.
You give me a demon smile.
Raise your hands.
 The cement open up for you.

You tell me.
You will not die.
I'm your punishment.

You ran away from everyone.
I'm your time in hell for being a b*****d.

You will be my fool.
I will hold you as a prisoner till only a flicker
of emotion is left.

You will live till you only wish will be a trip into hell.

THE PHONE IS RINGING

I awake and I answer the phone.
I hear a sweet voice.

You whisper. Come to me now.

                          Coyote
                        1996

© 2010 Coyote Poetry


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Coyote Poetry
A old poem. Any errors. Please assist. Never too old to learn.

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'A mad man prayer'
Coyote poetry,
This title fits.. the whole thing speaks of self destruction. I have known people which would of robbed me of life too. The first line and last line really give this contrast of dark and light and then everything in between.
'I woke up with your name on my lips'
last line.
'you whisper, "come to me now.'
Your body of work speaks of the pain people inflict on one another and even upon themselves.
Be careful what you wish for was the thread through this piece which is a good bit of advice for anyone whom wants to love and be loved and will simply settle...hard lesson too.
Blessings,
Kathy




Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Kathy. I appreciate the comment. Love can be twisted.



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Dreams are a pain! But we all must cope with what we have no control over and a love thought lost is good fodder for dreams. You have painted your canvas brightly with wonderful pictures for your reader Coyote and a happy ending as well.
(watch your tense)
Thank you :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It always amazed me how are most precious relationships can hold such opposite emotions. I like the repeating ring of the phone.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I HAVE NO WORDS FOR PERFECTION...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

feel ur pain sir. loved the concrete imagery

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well said.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poem. I can feel all the emotions flowing from this. Great write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was amazing I can relate except till th end

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good description of the perils of love. i like how the phone is ringing throughout. good vehicle for continuity. i think i might try that. thanks.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was definitely a ride
well penned
love addiction to its highest and fastest extent

Posted 13 Years Ago


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