Bloody anger

Negative words and anger lead to dead-ends and separations. A wise man is quiet when anger control his mind.

                         







                                 










                                           Anger
 
Sometime I want to hurt someone.
 
Smart and wise-a*s faces  tempt you with comments and useless words.
 
People with no kindness or loyalty for anyone demand your time and duty.
 
Tire and drowning in personal problems.
 
Yearning for better days.
 
I don't blame no-one for my struggle and situation.
 
I believe we all dig our own graves. Good and bad.
 
Need to lose my anger. Family need me back.
 
I'm like so many.
 
Just staying ahead of the bills.
 
Waiting for a miracle that won't happen for a while.
 
Need to find laughter and peace.
 
Need to shut up and be kind.
 
Tomorrow will be a better day.
 
I will put aside my anger.
 
Can work it out with patience and love.
 
                     Coyote
                    17 March 2009

Author's Note

Patience and love is the way of the wise person.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Patience is definitely one that we learn as we journey into our lives, loving others for who they are instead of what we desire them to be. There are times all we can do is surrender and let go. You give hope to the hopeless. Great write. thanks for sharing.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

wise message here!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

What a true write...
anger and resentmemt can eat away you whole being....
and like you say patience and love is the key to a better,
fulfilling life...
Awesome writing :)

[Gomer LePoet]

Yes Coyote, patience and love or things we all need to exercise more often. I myself show little patience when felt I am taken for granted without consideration for my thoughts and feelings too. My lack of patience at times though leave me with dissatisfaction for those actions.

[Thea]

A truly brilliant poem...The author's note is just true...A wise person can always wait by having much patience and love in his heart. This poem is filled with wisdom. Thanks for sharing it with us.
:)))

[silorumeko]

I love this poem.
Though I'm young I can understand this...It's exactly how I feel when teachers decide to "put me in my place" or assign ridiculous assignments...Yeah this is very true

[?]

I agree a wise person is patient and loves....thinks before he speaks
Lots of wisdom here

[MandaBear]

very good work :) i enjoy reading what you write :)

[The Analog Kid]

Nice words of wisdom. First person is perfect here for this poem.

[Bridget Murphy]

A truely excelent piece. Someone once told me "Passions are good servents but bad masters" And this poem helped me think on that!!!:)
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[Kenneth The Poet]

Agreed. Timeless wisdom encapsulated. Thanks for this.