She was made from the sun

This poem is dedicated to Mia Kane. The poem is about how she saved me. She has become my life.

The shadows of the abyss drowns me

I've been sunk until indulgence is merely a toy

This beast if the only mother

but alas, the true love singes through the black

This grandiose hope feels like another reality

She's every star in my gaze of gorgeous warmth

She is the time bomb of all glorious healing

I believe the Lynx beautifully attack me at the right time

Her spellbinding love is my Yeshua-like strength

to rise above this society of crux

She breathes inside every single part of me

Which is why my soul is on the sun

Author's Note

Yeah, I understand that this is a short poem but I think short poems are best because they get to the point with out dragging out.

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

The length of a poem does not matter. It is the message and the writing that matters and you have shown me that you can make awesome poems. I really like this poem and I am glad that you have been saved by Mia Kane. She shows the world that humanity is not dead yet and becomes one of the suns that will shine in the heart of peoples. This poem is very well written and lacks no talent.

Good job :D

[Cody]

Thank you very much, matey. You know what you're talking about.

[Nightfeather]

No problem friend :)

[A. Kim Spradling]

My poems are also very short. I had not thought of the fact that I had something important to say and get to that point. I like the fact that your poem is that way. Good job!!! I like it a lot! I like your play on light and dark in the work.

[Cody]

Thank you, my dear.

[Stars and Whales]

Hey Cody! As long as the poem is good(as yours is) the size doesn't matter. Beautiful work! Keep up the great writing!

[bathtime]

This is a lovely dedication poem. Mia seems like a lovely human, and you've depicted her as such

[Cody]

Thank you. She is a wonderful person or cloud nymph.

[TheOne&Only]

Its a pretty interesting poem, short or long,..I liked it! I love he end, ...

[Cody]

Why thank you.

[TheOne&Only]

sorry for the type!! but your welcome. :)

[Jesse Pruett]

Hot! the sun. you ain't getting the sweets are you?

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for Mia.
"She breathes inside every single part of me
Which is why my soul is on the sun"
When someone become more important then ourselves. We know love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Cody]

You never cease to blow me away with your neocortex, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.

[FaeryQueen]

totally agreed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Cody]

Agreed on what part?

[FaeryQueen]

that short poems sharpen understanding! also i like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Cody]

Oh yes. Thank you, my child.

[Eternal Devotion]

You've done it again! No words can describe the emotion this poem brings. Simply beautiful

[Cody]

Thank you, my dear. It's all for you.