Frost

Eyes searching eternity for answers
Lips slightly parted
Snow flakes stick to my eyelashes
They cling to my face
And covers me like a blanket
Now alone in my frost coffin
I can finally sleep

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Auroa,

An interesting write. I don't normally equate "searching eternity for answers" with "I can finally sleep". Still, we never really find those answers before we finally sleep, and I take comfort in the fact that you found peace in those graceful snow flakes. It is an apt analogy for life, encapsulated in seven lines. Quite interesting and reflective.

Best regards,

Rick

[MoriartyMesa]

Maybe I am one of those people that see's something else, but I liked this. Who would not want those questions answered?

[Dream Mistress]

bravo deary

[Writer *78*]

Auroa,

This is very true we all spend an eternity searching for answers and such. As am I with the way things are now in my life. But I always find that my writing comes back to me. This is a very impressive poem to say the least. I would appreciate it if you would look at my latest work 'Phantom: The Darkness Within' and tell me what you think. There are more parts to it and they should be up very soon. Please message me to my inbox telling me what you thought of the poems.

Regards,
-Writer *78*

[Rob Santana]

The first line I kept reading over and over again. I really like your choice of words there. Keep doing your thing Frost I really like your work..

[Santiago Veracruz]

I love you. Your writing? Beautiful, you take me there and I love it. You get a smiley face.

[zainul]

A mind blowing piece.
Imageries are wonderful.
Enjoyed reading.

[Sid]

Interesting write, a bit dark but like Dr. said not dwelling too deep in darkness...great work!!

[DrD]

I don't usually like dark themes but this doesn't deal too deeply into it and I found it interesting. Nice job.

You're not alone dear one, never...
I have those flakes too... as glue.

Love to you, wonderful write!

E.L.