Bird

Winds call out to you
Wings take me away from me
Float into the skies

Author's Note

Todays daily is a haiku

Reviews

[Njeri Brooks]

This was very wise.

I feel like this could potentially be a message to someone.

"winds call out to you" could mean that the person is leaving because there's something else in store for them.

"wings take me away from me" could be a metaphor for all the "fame" that causes people to change. I feel like I could replace the word "wings" with the word "success".

The last line reminds me of the saying "blinded by ambition" because if your too busy climbing the ladder of success, you lose track of those who mean the most to you.

With that being said, I get the feeling that the emotions behind this haiku were possibly ones of remorse.

Please tell me if my assumptions were correct or not about each line.

[Centipedle]

It's a very nice interpretation for sure.
In my mind it's more feeling like you're trapped inside of yourself, and then you are finally able to "escape" your own mind and be who you truly think you'll be able to be.

[Njeri Brooks]

Ahhh, okay. Well, that's interesting. Lol, I guess I'm just projecting then.

[Centipedle]

to me personally regardless of a poem might mean to the author themselves. It should mean whatever the reader wants to think it as.

[Njeri Brooks]

hhhmmm, that's true. I never really thought of it like that...(personally, I'm more of a reader than a writer.)

[T.S. Sky]

I like this. For some reason I envision a summer blue sky and field of wheat.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Many of us wish to be like a free bird. Be able to fly away at-will. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. Wood ?]

I have to say that you have one too many syllables in the final line for it to be a true Haiku. It COULD be remedied and SHOULD be because it is a fine poem

[Centipedle]

Oh I just caught that.... maybe if I change inspire to float?

[Dr. Wood ?]

works for me

[Valentine]

I like the idea of this write but would have put 'you' at the end of the first line and 'me' at the end of the second. But that is your write and your choice. Valentine

[Einstein Noodle]

a bit of a conundrum to me ..wings typically applied mean fee to be me ..or maybe "run away" .. so i attach a metaphysical meaning to this poem ..as me is winged away from me ..i experience the empty mind state and am truly freed to experience the "real" me ... you have made me think ..its a bit confusing and abstracts from the "norm" but has definitely sparked the ol' noodle ;)
E.

[Tony Jordan]

Centipedle this has a lovely early-morn dawn chorus feel but it didn't have that 'ahh' feel that I wanted from it.
Still a good haiku though.
Keep writing
:)