Blank Canvas

I am a canvas for your imagination
You can paint me as you will
Use any color or variation
Paint me like you feel

Choose from your many brushes
Any style you like will do
Paint me as you please
I'll be a picture for you

Mix and match your palette of colors
Choose what you like best
Paint me like you feel
With splendid strokes of zest

You can display me for your pleasure
Hang me upon your wall
Frame me as your treasure
You are proud to show to all

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this oozes of trust...it wrings throughout the piece.
she trusts the artist, the man, to paint her as he sees fit. But the suggestion is that he will paint her with respect and love, and display the paintings with the pride that she and he are one.

i like this

jacob

Loved it too Neva,
An older and different one, but still
The touch of you dear sis.
I feel the beauty of being
discovered by the world, and
Let yourself free, and go,
And it's a huge meaning of trust
Into the hands of someone else.

Astonishing!

E.L.

[smurfett]

I love this Neva!! It is so happy. Well, it made me that way. Just uplifting!!

[Mark]

Different style for you, crafted very well. Maybe because I'm not female, but the poem made me feel a little uneasy... does she really mean it? heh

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

another old one Mark. I wrote that for a specific person who I felt was molding me into the woman they wanted me to be and was ok with it at the time. Still uneasy?

[Mark]

It's the write not you dear. I am not at the least bit uneasy with you. The poem reminds me of a few women in my past is all. :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is a very good poem amd concept- Sometimes we seem to paint our own picture of a person... Loved it Neva.

Chloe

[Pól]

Absolutely beautiful, simply stunning.

[Christina]

Lovely. :)