Two-Same View,Same Beat-One

The fire of love clings to hidden winds

and flourishes as it turns

without thought

to envelop the music

of your imagination.

It then peeks at the silence

created by its own tug of war

whispering..........

come one, come all,

feel this sensation.

The fire of love removes all distance,
chants your name
until our bodies  blur space and time
and you and I find
we are viewing the world
through the same pair of eyes.
Between our hearts
we both know
desire feeds the flame,
listen to them beat,
the rhythm.........
is now
the same.

Author's Note

Artist : Adam Martinakis

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i have always cherished the idea of two souls seeing through the same eyes. this poem has passion, fire and depth beyond what the written words tell. another beautifully crafted morsel of tenderness and love. Merry Christmas Neva. thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Quinfinn :)

[Ahmad Cox]

So beautiful and enchanting and sensual at the same time. I love it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Ahmad :)

[Sami Khalil]

This poem is awesome and so romantic but on a deeper level . The beginning drew me in with its beautiful metaphors till the end...A marvelous definition on love and its fire and how it burns space and time to become one pyre or one rhythm of the heart. Thank you for penning ...

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. My pleasure...:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A romantic expression of that feeling of being united when two people give to one another. loved the second stanza but found this phrase in the first took the beat from the moment.
'It then peeks at the silence
created by its own tug of war'

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you John :)

[Pax]

"The fire of love removes all distance"
~ when there is love distance is just an illusion... when two souls are bond with love anything is possible... the rhythm of the poem speaks so much of passion&love without bounderies...
Great poem plus the image itself is a great combo..

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Cold :)

[Acron 4]

It's the flesh, it needs and want so much. The flesh desires without thought. Were it not for our mind or that thing between heart and brain we would be no better then the animals. However we do have our minds and if it were not for it, we would spend our time listening to those fleshly whispers. One of those desires is another that might feel the ways we do. If we listen and feel deep enough...then perhaps....wonderful wonderful read...thanks for sharing

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Ron :)

[Emerald Seas]

Wow, this is simply stunning, Neva. Beautifully articulated and the picture is perfect to accompany this poem.
Lovely!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Que :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are a professional romantic... your words are a pure ballad to the heart.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you R&RC :)

[lee von cleef]

My dream catcher must not be working.This poem has stolen,pulled the blanket back,a memory I thought only I held,stuck in the rain, up on Clingmans Dome,the wind blowing the clouds litter;water,zig-zag light all around,Monkey balls tight on the corners of the poly, me and her ,Oblivious to the danger,coiled in twin time,bodies slick with life's raw emotion.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Lee :)

[Lino Rie]

Love your poem. It has nice flow. ^-^

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Fallen :)

[Draven]

This is amoung the best romance poems I have ever read, and goes in the top 10. I'm giving this a 100.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Casanova :)