Two-Same View,Same Beat-One

The fire of love clings to hidden winds

and flourishes as it turns

without thought

to envelop the music

of your imagination.

It then peeks at the silence

created by its own tug of war

whispering..........

come one, come all,

feel this sensation.

The fire of love removes all distance,
chants your name
until our bodies  blur space and time
and you and I find
we are viewing the world
through the same pair of eyes.
Between our hearts
we both know
desire feeds the flame,
listen to them beat,
the rhythm.........
is now
the same.

Author's Note

Artist : Adam Martinakis

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i have always cherished the idea of two souls seeing through the same eyes. this poem has passion, fire and depth beyond what the written words tell. another beautifully crafted morsel of tenderness and love. Merry Christmas Neva. thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Quinfinn :)

[Ruth]

Beautiful...one word I give your work...connection...
And profoundly so, I feel your words with energy :)
xox

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Poppy :)

[Adam Whitworth]

Merry Christmas, if the end of the world doesn't come first

[Aidz]

U know my thoughts on this one Neva xxoo

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you A :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...desire does feed the flame...but this is a more complete love poem and is about more than just physical desire...love shows itself in many ways...and you express it so well.

jacob

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Jacob :)

[Ana Drake]

Wow, wonderful romantic poem. I really felt it. And I love that picture, great piece :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you VocalDragon :)

[kelvin]

Though anybody has the heart to love no matter how cold if allowed to enter. the more you think of you and the other the fire or strength of you love grows, making it where the distance doesn't mean anything to you you'll travel across the world to be with them your love for the other is on a level of the same outlook their hearts are playing the same song all equally in tuned. for love is a very powerful powerful feeling of emotion once its been awaken. Nicely written read here thank you for sharing.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Kelvin :)

[kelvin]

You're very welcome

[Falling Leaf.]

This is very romantic and passionate, and I have to say that picture is really cool. Well done!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Savannah :)

[Frieda P]

Sounds like the most enticing of love making, two hearts beating as one, it's soft and cozy like a lullaby. It's that love that two people who have been in tune with one another know, there's a special rhythm there. Really lovely.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Frieda :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

well you nailed it again...Soft and powerful....Quite amazing

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Dr Wood :)