Harmony Breathes In

I see your heartbeat in every man

and I can hear your mind

even though you hide

behind the sun.

You disappear

into places of mystery

where you survive

inside your fun.

You see yourself

as the lost make believe

and leave no room for reality

to ever be the same.

All those bridges you are burning

have you drowning

inside of your

own shame.

You want to vanish

into a spiraling truth

and be heard

by your feelings

while reaching out.

There is no such thing as honor

when sitting on a velvet seat

where you only shout.

Your tears will soon pass

when you think

of the anticipation

of the dreams you had

in your cradle.

Harmony breathes in a quiet breath

lasts forever

if it is able.

Author's Note

*Artist Santiago Caruso

Reviews

[jerrypat]

The price we have to pay for being inconsiderate and downright mean to those who love us, but get no love in return, is loneliness and friendless in the end. To be so selfish as to think they are superior in a love affair is a shame. Those who take pleasure in hurting others is a sub-human and not worthy of a second glance. The only thing is they hide that side of them until the hook have been swallowed before showing their true selves. Good poetry.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you jerrypat

[Becky C Strukamp]

I became lost within my own cravings as I read this. A beautifully composed writing. Your writes are inspirational. Each one so relateable. I get lost within each word. Loved it!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Becky :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Kudos to naother superb poem....powerful imagery...

an insight into human ways...great!!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Yas :)

[MOON]

Beautiful write so many striking lines, almost like living shallow on the surface .. All those bridges you are burning see you drowning in your own shame great imagery.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you moon

[Ruth]

If only a moment could be paused and we could show people what we truly mean to their faces...the world of words...least we have that ♥

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you dear Poppy :)

[nwachukwu c]

My humble view. I suppose there is beauty in every human, but we have all try to hide it inorder to survive. Our goodness now, only sing in our own mind, only to be appreciated by us and not been shown, that others may not take advantage of it. But it will be awesome, if it could review in us all. HARMONY BREATHS! with no fear of it could be appreciated again. It will be beautiful if harmony should stop hiding in the back of our mind, let show it, and rebeautify our world. Good one

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you nwachukwu :)

[Kristoffer Tomminator L..]

I find this very beautiful. Maybe also a little depressing, but I like it. :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you :)

[KAREN]

Has a great message in it, we need to just take the time to enjoy life and live it to the fullest. Beautifuly done as always!
100/100

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you :)

[Morgan Storms]

"I see your heartbeat in every man"
Perfect first line.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you morgan :)

[Rhianne Ney]

The poem was profound and a nice piece, spoke of humanity in not so kind way but understandably evoked (:
Nice job~

100/100

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Rhianne :)

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome(: